1) the second interlude was long and was indirectly linked to the MC, I lost interest in reading that part 2) the mc will be less annoying in some parts, and I don't like a system that forces you to do things and responds to its host. 3) it depends more on the author, but the speed of your story is good, not slow or fast. 4 and 5 are beyond my capabilities :( These are just my opinions, and overall I liked the story, and I hope I was clear, as I use a translator to write xD
ch 18 a small question.
Fantasy · Rivertalon
Hello, I was reviewing my library yesterday and removing the stories that have already been abandoned or the ones that I would never read again, while I see some stories that marked me, and this was one of them, I hope you have fun writing it as much as I have fun reading it. or rereading. sorry about my English
ch 29 *I’m back*
Anime & Comics · EternalEclipse1738
me too, the 'human or humanoid form' kills my interest in reading, as it seems like I'm reading any other 95% of the stories, in this case some human MC who found a sea king zoan devil fruit. Well, good reading for those who continue, sorry for my english.
ch 0 9 Results
Anime & Comics · Onions
and because it has the power of intangibility, it can become an excuse for being able to 'swim'
ch 0 8 Poll
Anime & Comics · Onions
an alternative version of horo horo no mi, gaining intangibility and being able to float out of the water, and the ghosts would be a 'baby' version of the MC that are hidden in its tentacles, functioning similar to the pokémon dragapult, can mistake him for a mother, until he sees him 'throwing' his children and blowing up their faces
ch 0 8 Poll
Anime & Comics · Onions
A
ch 18 I’m back! With a twist.
Video Games · AzureFluteFan2
3
not understand humans and understand the Palico, but still unable to speak with the Palico. an idea that crossed my mind :v
ch 0 6 NOT A CHAPTER JUST A QUESTION
Fantasy · Onions
I don't like human form, but the others are interesting
ch 11 Question.
Others · StoryCraft
Merry Christmas :)
ch 10 Chp. 10 I'm Not Crying You Are :' (
Anime & Comics · PUGMECH
I liked very much :)
I'm excited for chapter 2 ^~^
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 The Beginning
Fantasy · Shadow_Wolf24
I'm curious :)
ch 0 1 Chapter 1- The Apocalypse Begins
Games · Crash_Cooper
so far, I am liking it [img=update]
ch 0 4 Iuncturam regno
Fantasy · axeltheeugene
continue [img=recommend]
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Fantasy · Leugimalme
Celebi is now one of my favorite mythical Pokemon after reading this fanfic :)
ch 19 Acquaintances
Anime & Comics · EternalEclipse1738
probably not, because there are some stories that I care more about, but I can't afford them.
ch 18 a small question.
Dropped. new one will come
Fantasy · Rivertalon