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Lotus_McQueen

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this was indeed said and it sums my thoughts too about your book: I don't agree with those who commented before me. Why is the novel confusing? Why is it a mess? Maybe it is if you read a novel for preschoolers your whole life your brain cells die over time. I don't know, I just speculating. But it's a fact that if you don't use it you lose it. Maybe some ppl lost it. Anyway, this novel is simple. It's a sci-fi-type novel of intergalactic beings. A world with a very high level of technology. The protagonist was indeed sent back in time a week before the start of an intergalactic game that opens for menkind. This game seems to be the hope for the future of humanity and his beloved sister. He takes his knowledge from the future and makes the most out of it. What is interesting is that he does not have 100% of his memory and sometimes unforeseen things happen. Now my review. I like the story actually the author said it starts slow but to me, it's full of things that make me curious and it's not slow at all. for me slow is when a story is annoyingly boring, when nothing actually happens. The story is not a fighting everybody every second type of novel. which I like. 90% of the story so far happens inside the game. But I know there is a world outside the game the author has not really touched upon yet. Now, this seems to also be a cultivation novel??? So I don't see where that is going to fit well in a sci-fi gaming environment that is my only concern about this novel because now everything is about stats and happens inside the game. So will it all turn onto the dao? Immortals? Flying on a sword and searching for the pinnacle of life? Going against the heavens? IDK? I have not gone too far yet for me to know that. I hope It does not become a Chinese face slapping showdown.

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