The tenses are horrid, the story seems interesting but it’s hard to read. Please,revise your chapters with MS Word or something that will actually help you construct sentences that make sense
ch 0 5 CH: 4 Unexpected Meeting and Unexpected Changes
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
What orphanage are you talking about here? And please deal with your grammar
ch 0 4 CH: 3 Royalties and plans
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
How did he get it in the first place?
ch 22 Ch 22
Anime & Comics · Quetzalcotal
I actually think I like it, not enough to give a rating yet but I see you took my last comment into consideration about expanding the wizarding world back whe the Dimensional fix was starting and I look forward to seeing where you with it
ch 578 Chapter 1. Awakening (I)
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
Progenitor doesn’t mean what you think it means 🤦🏿♂️ it means ancestor,forebearer or the most used meaning ,originator. It does have anything to do with being the best in a certain race,it means you’re the beginner of the race,where they come from
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Why does this sound like Teen Titans Go, that is personally the worst representation of them I have ever seen. I hate it,way too childish. I would appreciate them sounding like the Titans TV Series,human like and less cartoony
ch 0 8 Chapter 8. A True God of Mischief
Anime & Comics · SorcererPrime
Rogue
Cliffanger kun 😡😡
ch 21 A Reptilian Adventure
Anime & Comics · Marine0IQ
I’m interested in the Teen Wolf one with Mr Harris,the young justice one sounds cool but there have been too many so far and I liked a few that still get me good,I really wanted to see what you could do with Extremis in DC and I am willing to wait for you to blow my mind. For marvel,marvel has a lot going on and I’ve read many from even comic lovers and it’s honestly been exhausting.
ch 0 8 News Time... Again!
Anime & Comics · Endless_Crow
It’s “infinite luck” not infinity luck
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Reincarnation
Anime & Comics · Clockwork_055
9000 IQ,really?? That’s too far fetched for the human brain. Even Reed Richards is not that smart,the IQ test in the 25th century must have been super easy for someone to get an IQ in the thousands 😂😂😂
ch 0 2 RISE OF THE INNOVATER
Anime & Comics · Tahsin_Aziz_Swapno
The phoenix force exists in every universe,it is the representation of life in each universe hence it’s existence. All of these are parts of a greater whole too since it’s main consciousness in multiversal. The ones in each universe retain their ability to make independent choices too since they are part of it
ch 10 Mutants Yes or no?
Movies · Charizard6
This is awesome,I love the way you get to explore the lore in both nasuverse and scp universe. It’s amazing and I like it
ch 0 9 Prelude to Chaldea Omake
Others · KarmaIsOP
**urban cultivation novel mc thinks
ch 53 This is doing a good deed!
Anime & Comics · FicNovels
This was a bit sketchy,especially your views about race were showing. Really offensive if you ask me,no wonder you said he used to be Chinese before being reborn white. The prejudice is exactly the way an urban cultivation novel thinks 😅😅 you literally just said the Japanese aren’t human and black women work in the mines 🙌🏿 Next time don’t say anything if you don’t have anything good to say,we are all a bit racist and it’s okay. You should just choose to not say anything at all and keep your prejudices to yourself. It does not reflect well on you. I’m a big fan by the way
ch 53 This is doing a good deed!
Anime & Comics · FicNovels
Why does he have to use mnemonic magic like Zatanna,thought you you could be more creative other than elemental magic which always sounds basic in most mage related light novel I have read. It’s always elements this and that. It gets boring pretty quickly because the use is always the same throughout every novel. The story sounds interesting by the way but this has to be addressed. I’ll read the next chapter so that I know I did not judge too early
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Why do most DXD fics focus on stealing Sacred Gears and wanting to be like the MC with a harem of his woman making them theirs. I thought you would develop a story where it wasn’t all about being like Issei but better but it’s all the same repackaged story. No offense but I’m disappointed. I was actually loving the idea of developing alchemy and when I read about him getting basic spell books I thought he’d learn something like alchemy circle manifestation like the way magic circles do in the air not this 😤
ch 19 Chapter 19: Path of Innovation
Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck