at least try to edit
"It's really a tiger falling Pingyang being bullied by dogs."
Anime & Comics · Unsightly
As I said, this is the holiday season so I was taking time to celebrate with my family. I apologize for trying to defend myself. but I will still be updating the two stories around the same time. maybe around 3 chapters a day for this one while 1 to 2 for the other.
ch 71 Results!
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
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Anime & Comics · pieinskie
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Movies · AshburnDz
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Movies · AshburnDz
yes. I should be able to write 4-5 ch tomorrow as well
ch 47 Promotion
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
I think so too. I designed it so MC will be weak emotionally in the beginning of the story and mature as the story goes on. I think it's boring if the MC is mentally prepared to handle all the dangers of the pirate world immediately. No one is, they need to readjust their mental psyche, it's just going to take a little while before MC does.
ch 36 Roger Pirates Pt.1
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
You mean like grand admiral thrawn. interesting, I do like me some thrawn
ch 34 Aftermath
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
you do have a point. I will consider that in the following chapters. thank you
ch 25 Prelude to Rebellion Pt. 1
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
It's because of the dark dark fruit, in canon amplifies the damage taken by the user. that is because he is absorbing everything he touches. IDK. just repeating what I found out.
The next 4 months were different. After establishing his foundation, in addition to his morning work out schedule, Zed made sure to teach him the basics of of rokushiki or the martial arts of the marines. He was asked which art he would like to master first and Percy quickly selected tekkai or the iron body. He had to ensure that he could take a hit successfully because of the weakness of his devil fruit. Receiving double damage for every hit was harsh for Percy, but the upside of his devil fruit was still worth it. Next he learned soru, the martial art that allows the user to move at superhuman speeds. He figured that with his speed, no one would be able to catch him and he can use his abilities from a far distance to attack. This proved to be a deadly combination for Percy because after sparing with Zed, he noticed that he was able to get closer to hitting his teacher with each passing day. Not once did he touch Zed during training and the fact that Percy getting closer to his goal of finally beating up his teacher brought a smile to his face.
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
he might be too old for them though. he's like in kizarus generation. unless ur into that lol.
ch 12 First Assignment
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
I think he just reached vice admiral. he's young in it. I don't want the MC to be too overpowered to soon or the story will be over before it begins. I would like at least some interactions between MC and luffy and the crew. I think it would be interesting to watch as luffy watch them get stronger while helping the revolutionaries in the background. as i said in the beginning, the MC hates the celestials. you know slaves and all that.
ch 10 Saving Zed
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
I think it will be interesting that instead of killing blackboard, he would keep him alive. a lot more sadistic that way
ch 0 6 Introduction to Powers
Anime & Comics · pieinskie
+1
love it so far. keep it up
ch 0 4 Three Years
Anime & Comics · Dark_Vader98
the book is supposed to be about upgrading Beasts. but, it hasn't even mentioned the dragon for the past 20 chapters or so. I think the author forgot what he is supposed to be writing about.
This Is A Frost Dragon Instead Of A Small Lizard
Fantasy · Blood Mage