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There are only 11 chapters right now and the story hasn't progressed very much. That isn't a bad thing per say. The autor has already stated that it is a slowburn type of story.Are these 11 chapters good enough to be top #1? Of course, not. Bots are very common in this site. This type of thinks aren't anything new

There is no way this story isn’t botted. 1. As of right now, there is literally no story. 2. The writing is sometimes weird. It feels like a translation. 3. The premise isn’t bad, but eventually it becomes a “inconsequential self-insert power trip.”

This fanfic is your typical mass produced, cheap and bland Marvel story. It has the same problems that many fanfics have in this site. The only difference here is that this fanfic is popular. -The fanfic doesn’t care about the source material: This fanfic is only a MCU story because it gains traction, and it is very popular in webnovel.com. -The MC doesn’t have any personality: He doesn’t even feel human. He is only there to keep the story forward. He literally just runs with the flow of the plot. -Show, don’t tell: If the MC is bland like Morvius then “show, don’t tell” because it is hard to read so many words when you don’t care about the protagonist when he is the whole focus. -Power fantasy done bad: I get it. Writing and reading power fantasy are fun but you need to try to don’t fall to the many cliches that exist out there. Sadly, this fanfic does exactly that. Bashing, OP main characters, protagonist is always right and gets everything easy. I really hope the author doesn’t delete this review because this isn’t a hate review. This is truly, just a review from someone with a different opinion.