I don't like that there are so many conversations going on, and I don't see the point in writing every thought of the characters. As they say show, don't tell. And I think the novel has problems with this.
ch 29 Those Who Laugh First, Cry At The Last
Fantasy · Resurgent
I used to love a stories about revenge, but after the act of revenge, they become boring. Plus after a while you start to wonder what the point of revenge is. Well, the main character took revenge, what's next? I hope that this is not just another story about revenge and the plot will be interesting.
ch 0 4 Who, Where, What Am I?
Fantasy · Resurgent
In all stories, the Oracles make the same mistake over and over again. They become the cause of their own predictions.
ch 0 2 The Painful Betrayal
Fantasy · Resurgent
successfully skipped information garbage.
ch 0 6 Quests
Fantasy · LivingVoid
It's alive (ノ゚0゚)ノ~!!! Looking forward to the development of the story.
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Whoaaa you are back. Glad to see you. wonderful chapter, can't wait to see more. Love your work romeru keep making me happy :D
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ch 40 Who Do You Think You Are?
The Damned Demon
Fantasy · Resurgent