ahaha maybe it's also because english isn't my native language that i don't "see" the issues with your writing.thanks for the reply, good luck
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Very good novel (writing, uptade and story) and interesting concept, still don't understand why it isn't more popular.
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ahaha maybe it's also because english isn't my native language that i don't "see" the issues with your writing.thanks for the reply, good luck
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