Badges 3
Moments 9
He did spend a skill point, he upgraded happy feet to fancy feet. Lol.
ch 85 Quick, status report!
Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ
you sonovabitch, you have my respect. (Arnold impression) :D
[Go get 'em!]
Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ
Hah! I I was right while everyone including the author in the past had thought that there were only females in an ant colony. If they were all females then they are monogendered and thus not 'females' but they should be called 'it's'. but what do I know? I only called it even from before the author spouted the females only thing. Anyway it can change colony species to colony species, so it can be stupid and confusing when you only check through a few insects to start a novel, so I am not hating, but the fans need to get some serious knowledge about this stuff before people jump on the band wagon and start to make a meme about it. Those people have less then 65IQ while they act less then 50IQ. But seriously, no hate and this comment will not be visited again by me, so don't expect a fight on who's right and wrong, starting a argument means you have already lost.
ch 16 Transform and roll out
Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ
Tell me you are joking...? Having character development to a single trait is simple, 2-3 chapters for a novel that has content but no plot, is short, and is 18+ within 20-30 chapters. It also applies to relationships where a stoic person who may or may not have a princess fantasy takes 8-9 chapters for a smooth transition. The fact that if it was a good medium novel, a trait/character development takes around 15-22 chapters depending on if you focused on it or gave sinking in period for streamlining the story so no defects are overly noticeable. It is not character development in a author chooses it situation if the story progresses to such a state within 16 chapters with 12 of him doing little things and being a pervert, provided she is the good kind of dere. On top of 1000 words being his most to ch.16 that is 12k words dedicated to development at max, and about 6k words at average for development. I don't want to continue this over a half+ year old comment. My answer to you is, wtf is your standard and how old are you? (Retorical question) don't answer.... >:)
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Shield Hero's Slow Harem Life
Anime & Comics · I_love_Rem
Ok, I don't want to say to change anything, but this is just a summary, what she had done/reacted and generally 1% of the chapter was what she was thinking other then the obvious. For a 1st or 2nd novel this is a good start, but generally bad if past this, it means there is barely any time or thought was put in especially considering how flimsy the start was. But again, it is miles ahead for a novice writer. Good job.
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Shield Hero's Slow Harem Life
Anime & Comics · I_love_Rem
the reason is I am busy, I am horrible at writing and am 70% sure I will fudge the story up in the first 20 chapters, and I would go on a rant of knowledge just to edit it and lose interest. I am autistic and am just a off the top of my head type of guy, especially since I have nothing to gain from it, and even then, I would rather not ask for money if I am not a professional, especially since it is rooster teeths and Monty oums mental and physical properties, especially since Monty is a god per say in the rooster teeth verse. I wouldn't be able to live with myself and write again if I were to drop it and I know I couldn't make multiple stories at the same time. not even considering busting a mean groove and writing so much I can keep a fan base. but thank you for the support, just a fan who passed by and ranted, I think you are amazing and hope you have a great day and stay covid free.
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short answer: Konosuba. Long answer: Konosuba. My answer: don't ask again.
Gacha Sovereign
Fantasy · Fixten