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After 12 chapters, The writing is good, easy to understand and good flow. Story so far is a bit slow but I feel like it have a good potential to make a good story. I'm hoping to see some action soon. Good luck going forward author, hoping to read a good story!!!

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sweet and short chapter :) And thanks for the note Author san!

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_Pain_
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would you like?

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_Pain_
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ohhhhhhhhhh

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hahaha

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_Pain_
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short chapter yah!

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uh huh *smirks*

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_Pain_
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Emotional chapter T.T

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T.T

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T.T

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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_Pain_
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You're doing great little Lu Zhi

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_Pain_
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First! Intriguing, but againnnnnn shortu chapteru

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_Pain_
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*flex muscles*

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aigoooo

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_Pain_
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First!!!!!! Dear Author, I liked the chapter, but it felt a little short....

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