Daoist799826

2yr

Posted

Update very slow,should update about 1 chapter everyday 3 days a chapter is too long.Waste some chapter on side character story that not important.And some chapter is very short.

Earth's Alpha Prime

Fantasy · MN_1223

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

Oh so you can add agility and you still doen't believe it was real.

"Am I… Witnessing reality right now…? Is this real?" He asked as he gulped down.

The Adapter's System

Fantasy · Renovator

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

Is he a child that scream at everything.

'The f**k?.... WHAT IN THE NAME OF ACTUAL F**K?' Arvin screamed with anger.

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

So dump.

'What are you talking…' Before Arvin could finish his sentence, he was interrupted by a very very very loud screech of a bird….

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

From chapter 1 to this chapther I haven't seen any moment that is worthy of being a genius all the time he just scream at his helper and not capable of making desicion of his own.

ch 40 Chapter-39<The Hunt-2>

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

So you have the quest to rush to the top and you know there is a tower and a floor,normal people would instantly be able to guess what that mean,unless youare a genius like him.

ch 32 Chapter-31<Guess who is back>

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

I think i am smarter than the so call genius because i know what f grade mean,WoW.

Arvin didn't know what was happening around here. He got the results for his mana test. His mana value is F while mana sensitivity is 1. He didn't know what to take from these numbers. Were they good? Or are they bad? He can't tell. And the people around him were not helping at all.

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

Some sort of genius with so call photographic memory that study in school but doen't know what grade f mean.

ch 23 Chapter-22<HTC branch-2>

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

So you think the fee is expensive so you screem like a noob that doesn't know any tging rather than remain expressionless thengritted his teeth when get to pay more than you should and not thinking about revenge.

ch 22 Chapter-21<HTC branch-1>

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

Why don't you want revenge against people who destroy you leg get your face burned and people who ridicule then?

But as he came here, all that plans of revenge and all that negative energy didn't matter anymore. He got his body fixed. He was living in a good and beautiful place. He didn't desire money as he knew what money could do to a person. He didn't want to go back to the world and live in the concrete jungle. Then what did he desire? Was it strength?...

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

Why is he so naive ,not getting angry while being tricked?

ch 11 Chapter-10<Unlucky man's lucky streak-1>

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Commented

Isn't he from earth and he supposed to be smarter than ordinary people, but he doesn't know about the system and he panicked,scared about almost everything that ordinary people should be able to guess what is going on even at age15.

ch 0 6 Chapter-5<Forced mission-1>

Solo Player Arvin

Fantasy · Aladin666

Daoist799826

2yr

Posted

MC is very soft-hearted,want to punish someone by law when there is corruption,and later never want to protect himself from gangster or bully the worst of all he don't kill,so someone who become a galactic librarian what might your desirebe?Mc:I want to rule the world because i just get stapped and realize there was corruption,so you are so naive you never though there was corruption,from my experience i know about corruption when i was about 13 years old and a 18 years old man never know it,Another fact he got stapped is he trie to be a hero(cliche)