Author: Unintentionally makes the book longer Readers:
ch 600 Where's the Camp??
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
Would be kinda funny if that flag for future wars was just a red herring and this is the only war the kids get to join. I’d rather there are more wars since they are usually interesting but would be kinda funny since they said that
ch 572 Introductions and Petitions to Battle
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
Just occured to me while reading but it was really nice that you used ”crunch” during the battle. it makes us unsure of whether the hit connected or not as opposed to the overused boom(or similar) that implies it got blocked or hit the ground. It made the fight feel more exciting while reading it since it didnt give it away immidiately. Small details like these no matter if you thought about it or not shows how great you have gotten at writing. Cant wait for next chp
ch 42 Not Sharp Enough
Fantasy · TheSilverQuill
you’re awesome :) looking forward to part 1
ch 22 Discussion Off the Record
Fantasy · TheSilverQuill
Dont confirm or deny but my current theory after hearing that gods and mortal experts both have veita in their eyes is that angels and demons are just another race like humans (just generally stronger) and that gods and demons counterpart are just the equvalent off human experts and they all have their variant of the ascention mentioned
ch 14 Nelphy Under Attack
Fantasy · TheSilverQuill
I guess you could call this raining on his parade, golden rain for a golden man lol
ch 12 A Pissed Off God
Fantasy · TheSilverQuill
I must say you have gotten alot better at introducing worlds since AJ, I can already feel myself starting to get absorbed in the world and wanting to binge like 20chp in a row. Just know that we enjoy your works and look forward to the stories you want to tell, even though some of us isnt always vocal about it
ch 0 6 Old Scars
Fantasy · TheSilverQuill
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop
ch 316 Rushing Ahead
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
Yea but he offered some of his wealth as tribute if I’m not missremembering and even a single coin wasted is worth mourning :P
ch 313 No Escape
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
I’m just imagining all the readers as ghosts floating around the room chanting ”fight” the whole time
ch 310 Conditional Agreement
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
I know just sounds more fun when you make comments almost true but not completely for some jokes, at least for me
ch 301 Training Officially Begins
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
Ouch, imagine being one of them three then overhearing Zelsh being like ”yea i belive Oli can 1v3 them later”
ch 301 Training Officially Begins
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
Are you sure that Zelsh isnt related to Oli’s mothers side. Because I could have sworn that was Bradok wakeing him before Zelsh’s name came up
ch 295 There's No Time to Waste!
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
For some reason I get the feeling Oli has a new holiday trip planned...
ch 292 What's Devil's Canyon???
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
Zelsh with the good old bait and switch huh. Nice slap in Braks face, deserved
ch 265 Zelsh's Ultimate Decision
Eastern · TheSilverQuill
Meanwhile, LaRee tipped his head to the side. "Right hand? … But I'm left-handed."
Overlord of Outlaws
Sci-fi · TheSilverQuill