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English not being your first language explains why I thought it was a touch immature :) you’re doing great!

So far, so good :) Writing style is a bit immature, but great overall. Interesting characters and world build, fleshed out characters, and slight cliffhangers. I’m interested to know what happens next!

Same novel as I turned wild after being doted on by the big bosses, except with less information, and they changed some characteristics, like the dog turned into a cat, names changed, etc… it’s not even a smooth change. I’ rather see actually new novels instead of the same novels with new names.

Really great strong, unlimited flow novel. i cant wait to see what happens! The characters are pretty fleshed out, although i think i missed what the protagonist’s hair looks like 😅