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I've already read this book once before and I'm going to reread it again because of its amazing quality and the fantastic story telling. Other reasons include the character design and some of the best world building I've ever seen. I hope you continue to write this story and I cant wait for more.

I love this book i really hope you post more i have nothing to say about this book because it was that good. Also if you do continue to update id say lengthen the chapters a bit cause there long but i'm used to longish chapters and this is close and i'm sure others would appreciate it as well keep up the good work.

Thank you for writing this book i hope you continue to update. i also hope you continue to make more stories and keep going higher in your carrier.

Hello my name is grimmjow_adjuchas and i cant wait to red more this book has me hooked. the only suggestions i have is to broaden your word choice cause i have a feeling you were inspired by chinese novels. an example of this is "this diciple" it sounds like the person speaking is talking about someone else and not themselves.

It is a good book but it can still be improved cant wait for more.[img=recommend][img=recommend] Also if you have any recommendations id happily check them out. thank you

This was one of the greatest books I've ever read. Accept for some grammar mistakes this book could be made into a hard copy. Also I'm not a critique but if I were I would refer you to a publisher, Another thing thank you for making this book ive been going through depression and this has helped @Grimmjow_Adjucha signing off.