Webnovel Author: Ephode - Novel Collection

«First chapter spoilers. Read the review at your own risk.» I read the first chapter. First impressions? The stages of grief are portrayed accurately throughout the chapter. Leia goes through disbelief and denial when learning about the death of her mother and then enters the raging stage. Good illustration, I'd say. One thing that I'm thankful for is the lack of spelling errors or grammatical errors. All in all, I'd give this a 8.8 out of 10, based on the first chapter. So for all of you who’re wondering if this is worth it to read, I'd say based on what I've gleamed so far? Go for it! And for why I've given this a 8.8 rating, it's because of the pacing. Everything is happening so quickly, first Leia’s mother dies, she goes and gets drunk, goes into her father’s mansion and starts smashing his expensive cars. All in one chapter.

xD thank you for the generous review!

If it wouldn't be too much trouble, please do erase the review. I don't want to build my story's reputation and fanbase on unhonest reveiws.

No problem! Thanks for the review!

This novel is extremely written! Minimal grammar and spelling mistakes, and apparently the author has already planned all of it!? I don't see why no one would not want to read this!

Forgot to mention this, but you can read the tags If you're unsure what's the genre! Have a good day!

I'm honestly baffled - you read the synopsis alone and judged my story just from that...? Heh? How does that make sense? While I do appreciate the 5-star review, It irks me that you refused to read because the synopsis was long. That's the first time I've seen someone say they won't read something because of that haha.

Oh, really? Huge apologies then! I thought, that since this was a review, this was supposed to be a criticism haha!

First, of course I’m going to be defensive about it, I mean, It’s my story xD? Second, I was just explaining things, never have I ever intended to come about ‘defensive’ and I apologize if I did haha. Third, the Devil forfeited his control over Elkend’s destiny/whatever governs his life the moment he threw him into another world, and even if he could control Elkend’s destiny, he wouldn’t since that would ruin the whole point of throwing him into another world with his memories intact. And last but not least, thank you for the criticism! It’s really appreciated! Don’t worry, I’m going to be paying more attention to the plot holes from now on! (And yes, I’m a male if you were asking.)