Danni_Brit

Danni_Brit

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My comments on other novels/fanfic are how I brainstorm for my own fanfic I'm writing. I've not gotten much written, but it's getting there. My ADHD isn't helping much with my writing though. lol

2019-11-03 Joined Global
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Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
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okay, if this is the edited version, I'd hate to see what the unedited version was like

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Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
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"Until something suddenly appeared before him, he was so focused." --> "He was so focused, until something suddenly appeared before him."

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Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
Commented

shouldn't the dungeon spawn a juggernaut or something with all the damage the mc is doing

Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
Commented

instacast is prob the closest thing in danmachi, needing only 1-3 words to cast a spell

"I can program weapons with spells so that they can send out elemental attacks which will drain and use your Mind rather than the mana within the weapon so instead of those stupid Crozzo Magic Swords these won't break, plus you also strengthen your mind with such weapons." I said as I shot a couple bolts of the staff into the ground to show proof making Riveria's face twitch at the staff needing no damned incantation which was needed for all magic in Danmachi.

Terrarian in the Dungeon

Terrarian in the Dungeon

Anime & Comics · Azazyel

Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
Replied to Bierbart

my thoughts exactly. the author be slacking

Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
Commented

someone make this right now. we need this, you just don't know it yet.(or you do but, refuse to believe such a masterpiece could be made)

Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
Commented

why you gotta be sus?

Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
Replied to ChikinBorger

and definitely not until she's at least 5 years older(if not more)

Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
Commented

I don't get it.... was I supposed to not get it? or am I just uncultured?

Danni_Brit
Danni_Brit
3 years ago
Replied to DaoOfNoFucks

look, I hate the grape headed perv as much as the next guy, but I honestly don't think he'd r#pe anyone. he's too much of a wuss to do something like that