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I know you are writing for yourself and i respect that🙂 I'm sorry if u felt offended I really didnt mean to do that, anyway it's a good story 🙂

I think you can also merge chapters from 80 - 95 😅

Hi, I started reading your story cause I really liked your synopsis-I mean it is different from other stories To be honest at the beginning the story was going good, but now it's starting to get boring and its very slow.. there are too many unwanted scenes I think.. you should just cut few chapters, edit them , or just merge them, you are kind of stretching this story. I literally had to skip few chapters in between and I exactly knew what would have happen in previous chapters. for eg: you could cut down/merge the office scene when yuyuan visit his office, just remove unwanted scenes. eg: when Jiang siblings visit their (own)new house you can cut that short . Your story has a great plot but it's just too slow it's not moving forward, it's kind of stuck at one thing like there is no adventure and one more thing for me its irritating is that your Fl is pampered a lot! For me it kind of ruins the whole plot. (But different people have different perspectives, that's my view on Fl ) I hope you understand what I am trying to say😅😅😅😅just shorten your story merge chapters/remove unwanted scenes please I wanna know what will happen to main leads but it's really getting boring ..🙏🙏🙏Please.

I think she is assassin 🤔

Ok thank you 😊

ohh , actually I meant more pages in each chap😅😅

can you add some more chapters , I mean there are only 3 it get over within seconds