And I understand and to a certain extent I agree, but the author could have the decency to at least demarcate the change of POV, because changing in the middle of a sentence, or from one paragraph to another, without warning is very irritating!
How did he know?
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
https ://www .fanfiction. net/u/ 4029118/0-Jordinio-0 ----------------------------------------------------------- É esse, mas sem os espaços
ch 152 Return To Monke - 4
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
Especially because the only reason I'm saving her is to abuse them... Which most of the time are also underage female characters (like Koneko)... so... eww....
Now, now... What should I do? Should I save Kuroka and Shirone? Should I save Akeno's mother?
Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1
There is an error in the part where it says that the first hokage(Hashirama Senju) trained the third(Hiruzen Sarutobi), in fact, the one who trained the third hokage(Hiruzen Sarutobi) was the second(Tobirama Senju), and not the first(Hashirama Senju )...
ch 11 Chapter 11 - Hokage Monument
Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
Waifus should die and Simp MCs with them...
Now, now... What should I do? Should I save Kuroka and Shirone? Should I save Akeno's mother?
Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1
How I imagine the author writing the chapters so far:
Wait, wait. Did you say two heavenly dragons? Is she talking about Ddraig and Albion? Are we in DxD?
Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1
In my country we have a name for this: Gado :)
[Skill of title [Tiny hero: Lv 1] was obtained]
Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1
Also... It could only be a fan of Shirou...
[Skill of title [Tiny hero: Lv 1] was obtained]
Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1
Honestly, it seems that the author simply didn't know how to let go of the Dragon Egg Manga canon, after all, that's basically what happens in the Manga, but without Tiamat, and the author simply didn't have the creativity to create his own original scene that would fit better. , after all, Manga is extremely cliché and unrealistic, like most Japanese works of the same style... Ps: Before anyone says something like "Ah, but someone else would have done that, just because you would do it differently, doesn't mean that everyone else would do it too", I say this, anyone in their right mind, in a situation like this, wouldn't would care about another person, be it a woman or a man, it is obvious that the author wanted to be as faithful as possible to the Japanese writing style, and sticking a female character would not require force down our throats, honestly, I am impressed that she has not already enchanted She is made to join your harem or something equally ridiculous, misogynistic to the extreme, but whatever...
ch 0 9 Wolves (edited)
Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1
Stupidity is timeless... :)
ch 0 9 Wolves (edited)
Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1
Actually no, she didn't save your life, she coincidentally caught the old man's attention when you needed it, it doesn't mean that if she had known you were there she would have done something to help you, it's really lame like in fanfics and Japanese stories the MC always puts the girls on some pedestal, like, she's just as human as the guy and the old man, she'd probably eat him on a skewer no problem... Rotten, I hope it really gets better...
"Yes, but this girl saved my life. That's why I want to save her."
Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1
Meh, Archer isn't that great either, so... ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Just think, if Emiya wasn't like that, how could Archer have existed?
Anime & Comics · GreatSage_Master1
I like the fanfic, I really do, but the dialogue is so poorly done that it hurts... Literally no one talks like that, the dialogue sounds like two amateur actors are trying to recite a poorly written script... Sorry if I'm being stupid, but I can't... The idea is good, the plot you built is good, but the execution is horrible, definitely at the MTL level of a Chinese Novel...
ch 13 Time For The Butterfly to Flap It's Wings!
Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
OK! :)
I agree! Best companion! Real husband material, guy Cleans, sews, cooks and on top of that he's a veterinarian/doctor! There's nothing to complain about lol!
Austin grinned and walked by Misty's bike. He thought to himself, "Well, I guess she won't be traveling with me after I barbecued her bike."
Pokémon : An Unexpected Journey
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet