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Guys, its a good book not unlike I am in Hollywood. Personally I didn’t find any problem with the grammar and the wish fulfillment aspect is there which is great. Definitely recommend. The only reason for not giving a 5 star is that you(author) claimed in the tags that this is a harem novel. I’m above 120 chapters now and there is NO sign of any harem. I’m not saying that the romance is bad. It’s actually one of the best dynamics I’ve read but I won’t deny i came for the harem in first place and it’s just not there. And inserting a harem after that much character dev between the MC and FMC will be unfavourable for the story. You should remove the harem tag at this point cause its deceiving if you claim and not deliver. This is the only reason I am thinking of dropping the novel as my reading preference is actually harem genre. Apart from that this is a great novel with interesting storyline and captivating development.

Mc is emptionless. Sorry don’t like to read about robots. Prefer humans who don’t kill innocent desperate people to save others because they interest the MC. Everything else is fine. But in this era of emptionless and cruel MCs I’d really like someone to break the trend to write an MC who’s not either dense/ stupid/ too nice or inhuman/evil/ dark. These tropes are getting boring now.

Im dropping it. Read 58 chapters now but it’s getting on my nerves now. The story is just a repetition of: mc gets woman, mc fucks woman on first encounter almost without any dialogue just asking for sex in return of his help, mc kills someone who talk to his woman and mc get more woman. I understand people need acruel mc but nowdays people foreget that there is a difference between cruelty and unreasonable. A guard askedone of his woman to take off the hood before entering the town and mc cut his arm off. He just asked as he was supposed to do cause that’s his job. This is just one of the examples and its getting frustrating everytime I read unnecessary cruelty. It just diminishes the value of the cruelty which has to be shown to real bad people. And the mc miamed everone who was ordered to harm him or his women but ran away from the real mastermind in fear. Like this is really frustrating. Dude show ruthlessness where it is required.🤦

Disappointing, so disappointing. Thisbis the worst fanfic. Following are the reasons(spoiler alert) 1. MC’s world choice to reincarnate into: No explanation whatsoever on why he chose to reincarnate in that apocalyptic world full of beings that can easily massacre cities 2. MCs choice of powers: He asked for flash like abilities but severely toned down. Then a perfect body whose only use is thermal resistance. I wonder, if you knew what world you are going into why would you not choose something that can actually deal with the titans? Dumb*ss 3. MC’s lack of plans: He had 10-13 years of time to prepare for Shiganshina district’s fall. And all he did was use his powers to kill small animals and humans. Like he did not even think of what he would do if he encountered titans. Like bro you KNOW the future and you have nothing planned up. No training, no plan Bs. Nothing. He just let the tragedy happen. 4: MCs mom died because of his uselessness: the only use of a fanfic is to change events that everyone wished to be changed. This dumb MC cause of his lack of preparations and him being satisfied with pretending to be hero for two small girls, got his mother dead under a rock during Shiganshina’s fall. Like BUDDY YOU KNEW THE FUTURE AND YOU STILL DID NOTHING!!!!!!!! The novel said he was really sad after his mother dies but all he did was run away from the titans and even got his mother’s remaing got eaten by a titan. Like author how is this a fanfic if you are just going to replace Eren with mc and bothing else. 5. No change in the story: As i said and you can see, all the author did was replace Eren with the MC and nothing else. The story happens exactly like the original except in the position of Eren there is MC. How can this be a fanfic. Morover the chapter length os so short, you can barely get into the chapter and it finishes. So disappointing

Is it a harem?

True buddy, Rias is dealt a heavy habd in almost all the fanfics. It’s really irritating, these authors seriously ignore and defame the actual character that the whole dxd is relied upon basically. Rias is THE face of dxd. Removing her is like taking 80% of the story’s essence away. This has frustrated me so much that now it has become my prerequisite for any dxd fanfic to treat Rias good. Otherwise I just don’t read it regardless of how good it eventually becomes. Dxd has been my all time favourite storyline. As someone who has watches the seasons as they aired and read the complete LN too, I have a few standards for the fanfics of the story and this is one of them.

I don’t why everyone dislikes Rias so much. All the fan fics every time either humiliates her or they make her character act like a stupid bit*h. I am seriously tired of these man. If anyone has ever read DxD properly, they would know that the main FMC is Rias Gremory and half the story is interesting because of her approach towards Issei. I can say the same about Issei and other characters. It’s like fav fuc authors only read/watch DxD just to write it their own way rather than understanding the story. I was gonna read this story but Man I am tired of these authors playin Rias bad. Droppin now

Read till chapter 60 and I am dropping. Lemme give some reasons: 1. Next to NO WorldBuilding. The story starts with an interesting premise but nothing is told of what happened in the two weeks. It just randomly states what will happen without any reason. The details are too around the bush and I am not able to form the mental image of the scenes in the story unlike the other novels. I don’t get how the environment looks, how the characters look, how the school is structured. Literall no world building at all. 2. Stupid/ weak minded MC: MC was good at the beginning but after aome time he just suddenly started making elementary mistakes which were eay out of character. Seriously, I could see the floor collapsing a whole chapters before it happenned and you are saying that neither the MC not fully trained cops did not even notice. STUPID!!! Dude literally got raped by his own crush with no confirmation of their relationships apart from a few sentenced amidst the chaos when one of them was not even fully concious.( Bro, swap the genders in that scene and see what happens in the comments. It would be scandalous if a guy have sex with a girl who cannot move and he knows that). Morover that rape scene was not emasculating. The whole mood was ruined. 3. Shitty harem: bro literally made the two his wives and the moment he is reunited with his childhood friend, he starts acting like a simp. And morover, even after all they went through, he was still treating both of em the same way he treated em when they first met. No signs of any closenes whatsoever. There is a thing called Suspension Bridge Effect man. 4. Useless System: apart from increasing basic stats, bo other use for the system. It is the shittiest system Ive seen till now. And mc doesn’t even try to explore his system. He’s just after that freaking merchant the whole time. Like hell man!! I got a few more but I think this long a length is enough

To be honest, the childish story that you wrote till here, i find it better than what you wrote after this. I love how childish and pure she was. At 500 right now, you broke her innocence too much. The story is too painful now. Pls do something about that. One can only read so much of tragedy in a story. Its gotten too much drama and the storyline now does not suit the title of the book 'The genius's fist love'. Pls think about what i said in the last sentence. I would love if you can/ could keep the story unique and not make it like the other dramatic romances we read with conspiracies and pain too common. Till chap 19 believe me i just loved how she was, her actions, her thoughts were so cute that one would definitely fall for her. Now she's like any other female protagonist and lost her cuteness which fascinated us so much. Pls don't break her too much. No offenses. I'm just in pain of her loosing herself which seems to me a little too unfair of the author.