Dhez - Profile

ntr noyuri noyandere no at least so far, 1 woman have probablitity to become one but she isnt included to mc harem yetyes he love the harem. and most likely their relationship have deeper reason. more info will be spoiler

good plot with development and pace. the romance was done pretty well, it has warm women, drama and everything. the harem are good so far, as a fan of anti hero and evil mc, the way mc conquered them pretty much fit with my taste. many reader wont happy with it but i want mc to conquere rebbeca as well, i dont know if author can fulfill my wish lol. ok, after all good things, i literally gave perfect score except writing quality. it was good, but I don't why after some chapter, author wrote a lot of description about every place and characters which unimportant. the words seems like a word that got rephrase by ai which pretty weird, at least for me. i havent read author other work and decided to take a look before i write this review which i found its indeed different. i dont know why it happen. probably to produce more word count or author just decided to change his writing style? anyway it still a recommended novel and i suggest any of you to try and read it even if i think it will better if author turn back to his old writing style

Grammarly surely helping. But sometimes it isn't enough. As a fellow Indonesian (just realized when i saw a note on your other novel) and your novel fans, i want to share with you. So im a writer myself, and as english isnt our main language so i did use grammarly too. but most of the times it isnt enough, it just doesnt flow correctly. but well obviously its because we arent native speaker. So i use quilbot and chatgpt to rephrase and editing. It really help a lot, maybe you can give it a try too. btw good luck, i wish a successfull journey on your novel 👍

Just want to try reading this. But when i check your previous novel and comment here, i start to doubt. Will you drop this novel midway or making hiatus like you did on previous novel as well? If you dont have commitment to finish what you start, it will be a waste of time and money for your reader.

I understand. This currently one of my fav novel means i like your writing. So im not saying you should change your style, but maybe you can tone it down a bit or finding more balance for story pace

dear author, being slow for the sake of fleshing out story and characters is ok. but 1 chap only just telling mc story of waking up from the bed with shuri, and next chapter only about him going to university, then it's the same with the rest of chapter. it slow because of too many unnecessary description or sophisticated words

Great novel with deep research well done by author. Like author said, its has very slow pace. The difference is, its slow not only on first volume but all the way to latest chap i read ( around 300 ). Imagine 300 chaps, only a month pass in novel. On the start of new volume, 1 chap only about him waking up from the bed, next chap about him went from his women home to university. Too many unnecessary description for the sake of words count. Well its ok for how it work on WN, but i hope author can control it abit or it will bored many reader. Other than that this is a great novel which you need to give it a try

Mc is unbelievably stupid. So many misunderstandings and unnecessary problem happen because of his own act. Having an idea about realistic mc is fine but he basically a clown. Mostly event happened so simple, heroines fallin love and forgive mc sooo easily which is contrary with the idea of making realistic story.

Good writing quality and characters design. Every character feels real and well written. well except the mc. Its the concept i understand. But the problem is this he have no direction, no purpose and many things often happens randomly. everything great when its still in academy arc, but going down and down after that. I completely lost interest when mc went to explore universe and other planet. I think so many reader like this novel because of mc relationship with his companion, ship mc relationship with several characters, their adventures etc. but author throw that at the window and decided to write the opposite. its no wonder so many reader left this novel afterwards

idea and plot are interesting. But surely need improvement on naration and grammar. well pratice make perfect, i won't critize too much on naration since its part of process. for English and grammar i suggest author to utilize some ai apps like quillbot to rephrase or grammar checking. im sure it can help a lot to improve the quality. keep going!

this is good novel but a pity looks like author want to drop it since he just release 1-2 chap recent weeks. many potential can be dug from plot but author isnt patient enough and discouraged by dropping of viewer or ticket. my suggestions is you need to create discord server and keep close with your reader. listen to their voice and get their interest to keep reading and contribute to your novel. anyway good luck for your next novel or chap if you decide to continue this novel

his senior/ex leader who had relationship with mc in the past become another man dao companion. cant really call it ntr cause mc doesnt actually have couple relationship with her. but literally open and free relationship. the woman also isnt worth simping so its ok

great novel which give attention to almost every character like enemies, harem, side character etc. its pros but also cons in my opinion. because sometimes it took too much chap. it made it seems boring, cause we only need important info, not detail background or what they doing all this time for those enemies or side char. other than that ,other cons is still tolerable. i have big expectation cause its one of my fav novel

very good. It had so many info dump that made it boring at beginning phase. book 1 ended in weird conclusions. enemy died by other people hand, women got stolen by another man etc etc.. but it become better and better afterwards. mc develop his character bit by bit and story start to show it potential. for reader who want to start to read this novel, i advice you to have some patient and read at least 100 chap before deciding to continue or drop it. if you decide to continue then i assure you that you wont regret your decision. its simply that good. if you are bored with cliche of generic chinese novel then its a must try

little bit different from my expectations. or maybe this novel is long enough yet to reach that point. comedy sometimes cringe but also gold. i only have one wish, that is author can release more chap. well 1 chap/day already good enough. but i cant help, this novel is just this good 👍

very cliche. too many coincidence which is ridiculous. aside that author made good effort on plot, mystery and some side scene which appear in middle of story. its just a bit lacking in execution. the blood trial mostly fill with constant nerf for mc. i believe it can be better, for example some mission relate to blood awakening rather than mission to kill someone with 30% or become a king and recultivate from 0.its simply boring. anyway keep going author, i know you can get better and better. cheers