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I drank her golden liquid; this wasn't my first golden shower, and I must say that it tasted heavenly... when I stopped her shower, I continued eating her out as she put her right leg over my shoulder and pushed my head deeper into her folds.

A Song of Blood and Sunlight

A Song of Blood and Sunlight

Book&Literature · Trafford

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Testing Corps* corpse is dead body :)

"Not very surprising," I answered. "Commander Svenson has been in Ad Astra's service as the Commander of the Testing Corpse for nearly a decade. He lost his leg during his time in the Alliance military, and can't act as a regular commander anymore. Yet, his mind is still as sharp as ever, and he has a knack for finding new and inspired ideas to use tactics and equipment outside the usual standards. He's heading the Testing Corpse, a unit that is charged with testing every piece of equipment that comes out of Ad Astra and its subsidiaries' factories before the Alliance gets the chance to add them to their arsenal. They test everything, from weapons and vehicles to mundane things like backpacks. 

Interesting Times

Interesting Times

Video Games · Zanarkand_Kido

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Wait, I got lost here, so is she married to Vernon or not?

"Well, if it will help me with the baby, maybe it's not a bad idea. I just don't want those magical things around the house when Vernon's sister Marge's husband comes to visit," she said, referring to the magic-hating in-law.

I'm Harry James Potter With Biokinetic Ability

I'm Harry James Potter With Biokinetic Ability

Movies · Kaioshin

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If she's talking about Sirius, shouldn't it be uncle?

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What's with the police chick? It feels like you already forgot about her.

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That's sound like star destroyer from Star Wars, only smaller…

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Its height was around five meters, and its length was just over a hundred. The width of the starship increased with every meter from the rounded tip, which probably was the cockpit. The lowest width was around two meters and grew until fifty meters at the end of the starship. Four round thrusters pointed out at the back, and my knowledge of starship engineering told me they were more than powerful enough to propel the small ship up to speeds that our own ships of similar length couldn't match.

Interesting Times

Interesting Times

Video Games · Zanarkand_Kido

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Who's Kuroto?

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And what was his bodyguard doing at this time?

Seeing this Kyouske used one hand to release her from her Genjutsu state and looked at her carefully only to find nothing happened to her at all.

Naruto : Black Rinne-Sharingan at the start

Naruto : Black Rinne-Sharingan at the start

Anime & Comics · tiko_tiko

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How did Karin get in there?

Sasuke, Jugo, Karin and Suigetsu had just entered the Village of the Crystals after a few hours of running.

Naruto : The Lightning Flash (Sasuke Uchiha)

Naruto : The Lightning Flash (Sasuke Uchiha)

Anime & Comics · Uchiha_Minato

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Fable 2 and 3.

"Nope nope nope nope nope nope nope!" I said repeatedly as I hailtailed it out of there with a confused Vesemir chasing after me.

Signs of Destiny (Witcher)

Signs of Destiny (Witcher)

Book&Literature · Bagoury

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I call this bs. He shouldn't be able to pass the barrier, especially that Nyarlathotep is imprisoned somewhere.

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Unfortunately, dao of drama is getting only stronger. When it was interesting in the first volume, I was hoping for some kind of solution for Nyarlathotep's interferences (making DxD his personal domain or somehow restricting direct access for other outer gods). Instead of that, we got nerfed MC – at least it looked like that for me. When both MC and Nyarlathotep are outer gods, for some reason, MC is still being f****d over by being unable to find her or by her simply deactivating all the protections MC put on his lovers. We all know where it's going, more drama by death of one of his harem girls. What's more frustrating is when in later chapters MC found her and using 50% of his power he was able to seriously injure her, but once again by some bullshit reason she got away, taking Azrael with her. I think that if both of them have the same power, being outer gods, then you should put in place some rules for them interacting with each other. For example, taking inspiration from gravitation forces, you can make something like a sphere of influence that every outer god spreads by simply existing. The closer to the god you are, the bigger his ability to warp reality. It would be more interesting reading about MC or Nyarlathotep going around this problem to mess with each other than it being one way where Nyarlathotep do whatever she wants without repercussions. Following this train of thoughts if you will, want her to still do what she did, this solution would at least force her to come to the same planet as MC. Nyarlathotep trapping his shadow soldiers and nullifying rings enchantments remotely from somewhere in space is highly questionable if they are basically equal in power or MC being stronger like I mentioned previously. I really enjoyed the first volume of this fanfic, that's why I had to vent my emotions. Sorry if someone will find my comment aggressive, but I couldn't have done otherwise, seeing as how in my opinion a fine piece of work is starting its way downhill quality wise.

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