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Replied to Ketsueki_Hasu Thanks for the answer, I understand her way of thinking a bit better now and do find the interactions between the four of them cute, it's just that the way it all come together was a bit brutal I thought but still nice at the end, I really like your book, thanks for sharing your story!
I shook my head, thought there was a small smile on my lips.
My Servant System
Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu
10mth
Commented Could you explain to me why does she react like this? During Kat's characterization, you present her as someone possessive. When adding the soul bound to it, she should be all over the place knowing that Anput was actively trying to separate her from Jahi yet, she is like "Yeah no biggy, whatever, I like you by the way !". Is there something that I missed or that I misunderstood that would explain why she went from I don't want to be part of a harem even if I have known you for years (her ex) to let's be part of the harem of my soul boud while they are trying to separate us?
Sorry for the ramble, but I do like your story that's why I want to understand because in this chapter I just have the impression that all the character development that you had in the past just disappeared to make it more plausible to add girls in the harem.
So if there is something I missed or an explanation I would love to have it
I shook my head, thought there was a small smile on my lips.
My Servant System
Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu
10mth
Replied to Vladimir_Alexander maybe his mother ?
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Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
1yr
Commented I really like the concept of modifying the plot of the world and the change you brought with it ! will he do that for every world he will visit ? Anyway, great chapter thanks !
ch 0 5 Prologue: Editing World+Background
Into The Unknown Omniverse
Anime & Comics · Mizv
2yr
Commented +1
Well, who wants to read more of this book?
In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)
Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
Alkatorr
"You've got the best eyes, Tut; what can you see?" Asked Gwen as she looked over the stone well alongside Tut, prompting Jean and Gwen to do the same.
Marvel's Black Steel
Movies · Ozonelayer