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  • Tired of Death

    Tired of Death

    Fantasy Magic dungeon death Zombie undead wizard

    Dreth is bored. He wants to know his past, which he's forgotten. So he sets out on a journey of discovery with some friends. The only thing is, Dreth is an evil half-dead dungeon guardian, and his friends are zombies. Oh, and his boss isn't happy with his decision... Any donations to the cause of writing (ie: the author) welcome via paypal at: neiharrob@outlook.com Any donations will be rewarded with one of my completed novellas! (Leave your contact email!)

  • Walkabout.

    Walkabout.

    Magical Realism

    Ian is an unusual boy. On the run, he lives in the shadows, living off seedy bars, he must keep ahead of those who want him back, for he has an ability that you *have* to listen to!

  • The Memoirs of Theodore Chance

    The Memoirs of Theodore Chance

    Horror&Thriller

    Theodore Chance. Happy go lucky teenager or physcotic mass murderer? You decide.

Moments

HCM! If you message me your email I'll send you Book2 of Tired of Death, for all your support. Sorry, can't find a message option on here. Stupid interface. View More

HyperChilliMan: See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Monster Paradise · C1238
2 months ago

HyperChilliMan: Thnx for the chapter, and a happy new year to you as well.

Tired of Death · C45
3 months ago
Thanks for the nice words CY. Glad you're enjoying.

I'm posting this up to where I've written every few days atm. It may slow down a bit later, 'cos it's ongoing, but when I know someone's reading it always encourages me to write faster!

Know what I mean? 'Course you do. 😉 View More

ClaireYsabella: This story is immensely interesting. It quite stands out from a lot of other stories in its genre--or maybe it is safe to say The Memoirs of Theodore Chance is setting its own genre. I love how in-your-face it is, and how the language reminds me of a Guy Ritchie film--the main character just chatting all casually, even if he's describing gore and violence, which only increases the story's narrative impact.

There's only one thing I don't like very much at this point--it's that the chapters are so deftly crafted, you end up feeling obsessed about reading the next one. Which of course is a compliment. I hope the author writes faster to slake my thirst, so to speak. Keep this up, please.

The Memoirs of Theodore Chance
3 months ago

ClaireYsabella: This story is immensely interesting. It quite stands out from a lot of other stories in its genre--or maybe it is safe to say The Memoirs of Theodore Chance is setting its own genre. I love how in-your-face it is, and how the language reminds me of a Guy Ritchie film--the main character just chatting all casually, even if he's describing gore and violence, which only increases the story's narrative impact.

There's only one thing I don't like very much at this point--it's that the chapters are so deftly crafted, you end up feeling obsessed about reading the next one. Which of course is a compliment. I hope the author writes faster to slake my thirst, so to speak. Keep this up, please.

The Memoirs of Theodore Chance
3 months ago
Thank you for reading and commenting opppypoppyop View More

Opepop: Love the interaction between the two !
I love it when there is a small group of friends/teammates exploring the world etc..... but most of the times the group gets too big or the interactions of the character are put in the background....
Anyway thanks !!

Tired of Death · C2
3 months ago

Opepop: Thanks

Tired of Death · C4
3 months ago
Thanks pops! Glad you like. 😊 View More

Opepop: Love the interaction between the two !
I love it when there is a small group of friends/teammates exploring the world etc..... but most of the times the group gets too big or the interactions of the character are put in the background....
Anyway thanks !!

Tired of Death · C2
3 months ago
The writing quality of this improved as it went on. View More
Rebirth: President Fatah Escapes · C3
3 months ago
Well, the last bit was better written, though I must say I didn't find his actions very believable.

It's a fairly original plot though, I'll say that.though it stretches credulity (within the parameters of the story obviously) somewhat.

As I mentioned before, and this is only my own personal opinium and you may well not agree, but I like to let the reader find out the backstory as the take progresses, rather than lumber them with a bloody great big monologue of dry history. That's offputting imo. If you hold information back and let bits dribble out as you go along, it keeps the reader guessing, and when something is revealed they go "Aah, so that's why..."

Tension, suspense, especially if you want a political thriller, is a must. So far there's really none of either here.

Still, early days...
Keep writing! View More
Rebirth: President Fatah Escapes · C2
3 months ago
When I write these characters come 'through' me, or so I believe! Thanks for reading, and feedback-ing! View More

mmtf: Are all novel characters a part of the author's subconscious? Curious thought.
However, I commend the depth of the character and your portray of it.

The Memoirs of Theodore Chance · C1
3 months ago
Reading Status: C1
Strangely enough, I wrote this story as a kind of 'alternate' life history. That is to say, what could have happened to me in another reality.
The plan is to actually, very broadly, follow my life 'pattern'. View More
The Memoirs of Theodore Chance
4 months ago
It would be nice if, just for a change, someone would do a bit of buildup before leading into, somewhat unbelievable, action.
A bit of ******* makes the action better when it finally does arrive.
Sigh. Sorry, this story fails to stand out from most of the others on this site. View More
Monster Paradise · C1
4 months ago
Mmm. You started following the main character, which was fine, only to interrupt it with a history lesson.
It s okay I guess, but i, and this is only my own personal preference, would rather find things out as I go along, rather than read a, rather dry, monologue of what had gone before.
Also, watch your tenses.
All that said, at least you didn't do what most on here do and lurch into half a dozen fight scenes. Kudos for that, if nothing else! 😁 View More
Rebirth: President Fatah Escapes · C1
4 months ago

Darcksage: That was a big cluster**** wow

Tired of Death · C21
4 months ago
Thanks Tim, glad you enjoying. Tell your friends! ;)
If you tell me where your writing is, I'll be happy to follow along. I can probably find it on your profile or something, but I find navigation here confusing and befuddling. Or maybe it's just my slow brain. 🙄 View More

Tim_Saian: This is the first time I'm leaving a review without being asked to. I really like this novel.
Not only is it particularly hard to find grammatical errors but the writing is so smooth that you would have to force yourself not to enjoy it. Its really easy to see yourself in the midst of the characters and thats hard to come by.
The story is a hook. I haven't read much cuz I'm busy writing a novel of my own but Lord this is Spirit stone worthy I wouldn't mind at all if this went premium.
If you like stories where the mc is legit the bad guy? Stories like that of the Joker or something, then I think you'd like this. Hey Author, keep it up, I may not comment often cuz I'm hurrying to the next chapter but you've got a loyal reader right here!

Tired of Death
4 months ago

Tim_Saian: This is the first time I'm leaving a review without being asked to. I really like this novel.
Not only is it particularly hard to find grammatical errors but the writing is so smooth that you would have to force yourself not to enjoy it. Its really easy to see yourself in the midst of the characters and thats hard to come by.
The story is a hook. I haven't read much cuz I'm busy writing a novel of my own but Lord this is Spirit stone worthy I wouldn't mind at all if this went premium.
If you like stories where the mc is legit the bad guy? Stories like that of the Joker or something, then I think you'd like this. Hey Author, keep it up, I may not comment often cuz I'm hurrying to the next chapter but you've got a loyal reader right here!

Tired of Death
4 months ago

Darcksage: Hilarious, thanks for the chapter

Tired of Death · C18
4 months ago
Thankyou Darc. There will be a new post every day, so keep watching!
Thanks for reading. Tell your friends! 😊 View More

Darcksage: Amazing story I want more!

Tired of Death · C14
4 months ago
Welcome to the story Tim. I hope you enjoy it. View More

Tim_Saian: I'm interested.

Tired of Death · C1
4 months ago
Sigh. The concept here is good, but it's ruined by A: What is basically a 'recap' of about a full novel's worth of story in two pages and B: The stupid stats interspersed amongst the text.
I don't know, maybe there's been a book one, and the first part of the story was told in that, but if not, then you'd actually have been better off not telling it at all, and having the reader slowly find out as the story goes on.
And, C: Sadly, like many stories on here, you just leap straight into the action, there's no world bulding, no getting to know the character(s), just wham bam thank you ma'am.
Suspense makes the action worth waiting for, and it also cheapens the action when there's just too much of it.
So, sadly, like so many stories on here, I won't be reading further. You have to hook the reader quickly, or they walk. View More
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C2
4 months ago
Very much appreciate your support HCM. There will be daily updates.
Keep with me all the way through, and I'll send you book 2 as a reward. 😊 View More

HyperChilliMan: Ive only read the first 3 chapters, and i already feel invested in the story. I writing style is very descriptive, just the way I like. Nice story mate, please keep writing.

Tired of Death
4 months ago
Thank you. Keep reading, there will be updates daily, and tell your friends! View More

pactera: Finally a book that's well written on here. I've actually registered just to show my support for this one. Keep writing, want more!
The characters are great, especially love the two zombie sidekicks, and it's about time someone took the side of evil!
P.
Oh, and 'Deceased and desist?' classic.

Tired of Death
4 months ago

pactera: Finally a book that's well written on here. I've actually registered just to show my support for this one. Keep writing, want more!
The characters are great, especially love the two zombie sidekicks, and it's about time someone took the side of evil!
P.
Oh, and 'Deceased and desist?' classic.

Tired of Death
4 months ago
Reading Status: C8
Excellent and unusual fantasy tale, if I do say so myself.
The point of view of evil dungeon monsters is often overlooked. People, unfairly, often side against the undead, without even getting to know them! View More
Tired of Death
4 months ago

HyperChilliMan: Zombie life...or should I say death... Lol

Tired of Death · C7
4 months ago
Thank you for your support HCM. I will be happy to read one of yours if you point me to it. View More

HyperChilliMan: Love It mate, Your descriptions are so vivid. And the change of tone in the whole story near the end was amazing. I'm gonna leave a comment on every chapter. Well Done.

Tired of Death · C1
4 months ago
Thank you! I'll be posting one chapter a day, so please keep reading! View More

Tim_Saian: I'm interested.

Tired of Death · C1
4 months ago

HyperChilliMan: Scary, and gruesome descriptions, Keep it up mate.

Tired of Death · C2
4 months ago
This has potential. However, like most writing on here, it seems that the author is too impatient to build up the character and suspense and just plunges headfirst into the action, rushing along as fast as possible.
As a result it is hard to empathise with the characters, or even get to know them.
Slow down, build the suspense, let the reader find out a bit of (interesting) backstory.
*show* the action, don't just *tell* the reader what is happening /has happened.
That said, the plot idea is okay. Had I written what you have done so far here, it would have been at least for times the length.
Stop and smell the story! View More
Monster Paradise · C1
4 months ago

HyperChilliMan: Ive only read the first 3 chapters, and i already feel invested in the story. I writing style is very descriptive, just the way I like. Nice story mate, please keep writing.

Tired of Death
4 months ago
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