Andrew_Sabine - Profile

I hope Khan gets to really show what all his training did for him... but I'm curious if he will find Martha

As long as you don't start re-writing and re-capping the intro every chapter, I'm okay with any word count.

Rebellion on Istrone?

Here goes another cliffhanger. But seriously, I thought Martha would at least make it to second base before Eve tried to kill her

I really hope he keeps practicing level 5 before he moves up to level 6.

I really want to know what level he will reach before facing problems.

The development so far is amazing. I am curious to see how far Khan will improve.

I'm interested to see what form the meaning of "evolve" will take

The pace is good, and the release times are good. The story leaves you interested and wanting more, which makes you eager to read it. Building the world and plot will take time, if it gets confusing us readers will let you know. Good job.