If you read so many novel, you will understand me.
Yah, that's the point. The author should lessen the foreplay.
It's getting boring. The r 18 seen is boring for me.
ch 97 (R18) Locked eyes
Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
The Cultivation of Shi Yu is 6th stage of the Foundation Realm, While Chen Feng is 9th Stage of the Qi Gathering Realm. Why She did not kill him?. Dumb Author creating a Plot hole. She can save the women in the last chapter if she kill chen feng.
ch 23 Ch-23: ILLUSORY Yin Physique
Eastern · Bloodsniper
And Fix the Wrong Grammar.
ch 12 Ch-12: Fear of being cucked
Eastern · Bloodsniper
Agree, the author ruined his work.
ch 12 Ch-12: Fear of being cucked
Eastern · Bloodsniper
Wang Ming said she easily dogged his attack????? It should be he. And Change Order in Stages.
ch 11 Ch-11: Conflict with Chen Feng
Eastern · Bloodsniper
She? Tf, it should be he, hayz
ch 11 Ch-11: Conflict with Chen Feng
Eastern · Bloodsniper
Like this, he wanted, it should be "you wanted" fix the Grammar.
ch 10 Ch-10: Shameless Wang Ming and devious Bai Lingxi
Eastern · Bloodsniper
Please check the Grammar, Fix it.
ch 10 Ch-10: Shameless Wang Ming and devious Bai Lingxi
Eastern · Bloodsniper
I think you should rewrite your novel, your novel has a potential, but it's repetitive.
ch 157 Makina and Marin Part 1
Action · ADboy245
You should add drama in the genre. Too much drama, and the word is to long and repetitive.
ch 157 Makina and Marin Part 1
Action · ADboy245
I hate this plot, is like a Chinese novel
ch 147 Trouble
Action · ADboy245
The mc is powerful but he did not use it. Kill them that's all.
ch 147 Trouble
Action · ADboy245
Hayz, im tired of it. Can you just kill him and done. So many dramas.
ch 147 Trouble
Action · ADboy245
Worst
ch 129 Man on Man Action!
Eastern · starry8sword
I don't know why the rating is high, but in the beginning it is good but it go downhill in chapter 30+ After the second arc. This novel has a potential But the author ruin it. Utterly trash.
Otaku Cultivator Exploring The Multiverse
Others · Dragon15681