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my bad pimp didn't realize you've started rewriting chapters keep up the good work

honestly it's surprisingly good I enjoy the dark, but loving Naruto. I would highly recommend proof reading or getting a beta tho other then that keep up the good work 👍

yeah I'ma keep it 100 with absolutely anyone who tries this story. there are a ungodly amount of unneeded comments from the author within the story, grammar mistakes, and overall cringe. I'm not trying to diss you, but get rid of the extra comments, and emojis, use grammarly, and it might be a okay story, not good simply okay. once again not trying to diss it's just painful to read the interactions between characters is sub par, and the actual story itself is purely wish fulfillment which I'm fine with if not for the fact that you went about it the wrong way there's no buildup, or anything. there are ways to make a good wish fulfillment, but you leave much to be desired hell just read Madara in the avatar world perfect example of essentially a perfect wish fulfillment in a way tho it may be unfair to be comparing to that author considering how impeccable they are in writing.

I'll put it this way first 17 chapters kinda okay, but cringey past that phenomenal keep up the good work mate..............................

I think its genuinely solid so far good grammar, and funny enough I shall follow this .....................................................

this book caught me off guard with how in depth it was, and how while it does indeed take aspects of among us it also shows completely different aspects just going to show how talented the author is. I highly recommend it the reasonings in the book are solid, and plans well thought out, emotions, and characters feel real, and not like cardboard cut outs plus the MC isn't as dumb as a box of rocks give it a go if it hasn't hooked you in the first few it probably isn't for you I'd say read up till 15-20 before giving your verdict.

I love the idea haven't read it, but the tobey maguire meme is worth the 5 star.............................................................