really is that going to be a problem
The first mile was easy—Jack Reacher's physicality meant I could run for hours without strain. The second mile, I pushed harder, testing the limits of this new body. The shoulder wound from Syria was healed, just a faint scar and occasional stiffness. Nothing that would slow me down.
TV · Vikrant_Utekar
Author is it possible for you not to frequently mention reacher or wick name. Maybe you're trying to paint an image but as it is now whenever their names are mentioned the immersion into the oc is disrupted and directed to either name that is mentioned
I hugged her back carefully, aware of the Reacher strength I now possessed. Beth was fierce and dangerous and had been Jack's primary defender growing up. She'd scared off bullies, threatened teachers who were unfair, and made it clear that anyone who hurt her baby brother would pay dearly.
TV · Vikrant_Utekar
must it always draw blood can't be avoid cleanly
kick, though the toe of the giant's boot grazed his shoulder, drawing a line of
Anime & Comics · hollowborn2
think it's time Mc start dominating and stop having to brawl to have a good fight he should be doing that already
what's the point of using tech which makes you bleed
Ren's eyes were now leaking tears of blood as he redlined his neurological system. He twisted his core, breaking Kureha's balance, and fired a second knee strike.
Anime & Comics · hollowborn2
can you just stop with this men of divine realm
Baku's physical stamina was shockingly poor. After just one flight of stairs, he had been gasping for air. To keep up with the Man of the Divine Realm and Ren, Kaji had been forced to carry Baku on his back all the way to the eighth floor.
Anime & Comics · hollowborn2
The book is a good read I love the story it is quite engrossing. The only issues i have with the book is how the bond performs some tasks they don't need to at all and how they are constrained with some human necessities like fatigue from walking( why walk in the first place if it's not needed) there are some instances they could have remained in their tattooed form but no they have to accompany the characters in activities they don't need to
Yeah the book will always pull you back even if you leave. It has that effect
ever or till you're done with this
The next arc is centered around my Original Concepts, but Bakugo will be one of the main focus points in it.
Anime & Comics · droopyauthor
loving the format of your story. no unnecessary drama
Jujutsu Kaisen: The Zenin Anomaly
Anime & Comics · TheDevotedReader