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ch 0 1 To Be Late is Human
LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 To Be Late is Human
LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 To Be Late is Human
LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
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ch 0 1 To Be Late is Human
LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 0 1 To Be Late is Human
LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
Weird comment I know but this paragraph is perfectly curved. It satisfies my OCD 100000%. It's amazing. Just saying. 😆
Orario had entered something everybody referred to as the 'Dark Days'. A time where evil gods, and their deranged followers rampaged upon adventurers, citizens and gods alike and blood was spilled like rivers in the streets of the so called 'Center of the World'.
Anime & Comics · Vulkizaro_Zoromi
Agreed, it makes things easier to understand.
do i give the skills a description of what they do or not?
Video Games · Endless_snow
Also, I have heard Webnovel uses bots for view count. I wanna see how much legitimate readers I have. Comment on this paragraph "I am not a bot" or something else. Yes, I said in this paragraph comment, not in the chapter comments.
Anime & Comics · Triple_Sweet
I have to say thank you for not going the Harem route. I wouldn't have even thought of reading this if it was the harem. it becomes so hard to find good fanfics (especially reincarnation/transmigration). thank you!!!
ch 0 1 Getting Adopted*Edited*
Anime & Comics · Akros_Zero
don't worry about haters.
please drop some motivational quotes or some shit.
Anime & Comics · SlimeSage
I agree with the other comment on here. I think the English is really good and a lot better than I have seen on Webnovel before. I suggest Grammarly just to fix up common mistakes and also give you an idea of what you could do better. overall I think it's 5/5 so far.
Do I need to use Grammarly?)
Anime & Comics · SlimeSage
I can already tell the story will be interesting can't wait for more. Hope you have a nice day.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Transmigration
Anime & Comics · MasterOfDeath7777
I agree with this, so put it under ally as a type of pet. turning it into a love rival will only have 2 conclusions, one is Li kills it out of jealousy or Erha can't choose between the 2 and there is a threesome. Turning it into a weapon I feel would make Erha sad constantly. one route is to make it somewhat emotionless at the beginning, forming a strong (albeit cold at first) connection with Li, and slowly expressing emotion (through interaction with Erha), and acting somewhat ignorant and childlike. adding in this character development I think is important.
ch 31 the second unlocking
Urban · alexDna
the term would be Heterochromatic eyes. Mono means 'single' or 'one' and Chrom usually refers to the color. Since it's 2 different colors it is 'Hetero' meaning 'many' or 'different'. so heterochromia is having different colors.
Because I have monochrome eyes.
LGBT+ · Shyphoenix_1130
Rest up and hope you have a good day. Can't wait to see some revenge on the kidnappers. I wonder which way your going to write Erha's escape. Is Lin coming to the rescue or is Erha going to use the shop to summon someone or something to take them down? I kinda want to see Erha be able to back up his claim in previous chapters that he isn't weak and the Mer are strong. I just don't know if I would go full "rescue the kidnapped princess" or "Knight in shining armor" route. I understand you want to develop feelings between the 2 but I think having Erha take care of the situation himself would make it so Li can respect Erha's individuality and ability but still be overprotective as opposed to Li coming to the rescue and never letting Erha having his own space and constantly worrying. this is my personal opinion because I want their relationship to be healthy and cooperative. This would also make it so they can trust each other's powers to go hunting zombies together which seems fun and kinda romantic. 😆
ch 21 something went wrong
Urban · alexDna
Erha will fall in love first. He will never want to be away from Li due to the safety, protection, and warmth. He will not be the one to make the first move due to his shyness but that same shyness is going to be what attracts Li, who will make the first move. can't wait to see it.
ch 20 today i'm a sad fish
Urban · alexDna
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 89 Kora's speculation
I Am Tired Of Being A Hero
LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars