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So I suggested that the MC change Huo Yuhao's personality. Or at the very least, the MC wouldn't become too familiar with Huo Yuhou And actually I prefer to study at Sun and Moon College (Mingdu). After all, the soul guidance profession is closely related to the future. If it weren't for Tang San interfering in the affairs of the lower realm, perhaps the Douluo Continent would have already achieved the unification of SL 2. After all that was the general trend of the historical section. Also, if MC goes to Shrek, please kick Zhou Yi out. In any case, I don't think Zhou Yi is suitable to be a teacher. Punishing students just for not fighting, expelling students just for failing once in running practice and everything.

A little advice For the matter of Tianmeng, I think it is better to still give it to Hou Yuhuo. And give new cheats to MC. If I had to choose, I would rather take Electroluc over Tianmemg. After all, the electrolux in Hou Yuhou's hands was considered a waste of resources. Please also don't turn the MC into a licking dog. Because honestly, I read SL 2 and I was quite angry with Hou Yuhou who became Tang San's pet dog. Moreover, Hou Yuhou at the beginning of the novel is determined to take revenge for the death of his mother. Then, towards the end of the novel, he even forgives Dai Hao and changes his surname from Hou to Dai.

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I really like your story. What's more, you take Douluo Dalu II as the background, it's very rare to see fanfiction with SL2 background, most of them take Soul Land 1 background. I hope you can keep it healthy so that you regularly update. Because really, I usually read fanfiction, but the Fakfiction ran aground in the middle of the road. If I may suggest, please don't Harem.