Cool premise. Story has great potential. Magic is awesome and detailed. Can't wait to see more of the world. There are some flaws, but nothing that can't be fixed. Recommend as a cool LitRPG and Progression Fantasy.
Sci-fi · Flashmaru
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Cool premise. Story has great potential. Magic is awesome and detailed. Can't wait to see more of the world. There are some flaws, but nothing that can't be fixed. Recommend as a cool LitRPG and Progression Fantasy.
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Sci-fi · Flashmaru