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Moments 607
One more typo in initial paragraphs
ch 0 6 Catching A Voyeur (Yun Che x Cang Yue x Xiao Lingxi)
Against the Gods (Untold Tales)
Book&Literature 路 Kirbyisgreen
Feels a bit bland and quick paced, your other novel also had very fast forward lemons
ch 0 4 Trying Something New (Yun Che x Cang Yue)
Against the Gods (Untold Tales)
Book&Literature 路 Kirbyisgreen
There is typo
ch 0 3 Awkward Situation (Xia Yuanba x Cang Yue x Yun Che)
Against the Gods (Untold Tales)
Book&Literature 路 Kirbyisgreen
There are grammer mistakes
ch 0 2 Senior Sister (Xia Yuanba x Cang Yue)
Against the Gods (Untold Tales)
Book&Literature 路 Kirbyisgreen
yeah this doesn't feel like real life interaction, it should be more later into the story and when MC asks questions
"There wouldn't a single girl that would be able to resist your looks. And you'd be the crowd-turner wherever you go...Women would fight for you to just glance at them, and there will never be another dull moment in your life." My mom said with absolute confidence, as if she could already imagine it happening.聽
God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem
Urban 路 AGodAmongMen
too much monologue actually
That's a milf alright. A fine one at that...The finest I've ever seen in my entire life.
God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem
Urban 路 AGodAmongMen
you need a different sensory system to measure the current sensory system. it's here something is impossible going on. like 1+2=4.
I could feel the pain of my bone leaving the socket, so this couldn't be a hallucination. And just to make sure that this wasn't some simulation, I followed the signal pathway of my neurons all the way from my muscular neurons near my shoulder all the way up until they went through my spine and reached my brain. After calculating the total voltage it would take for the sensation of pain to reach my brain and seeing that's similar to the voltage change in my neurons now, I confirmed I wasn't in a simulation since my consciousness was still in my body.聽
God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem
Urban 路 AGodAmongMen
Hmm? That's strange. Did I pull the plug on the wrong computer?
God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem
Urban 路 AGodAmongMen
why don't you do it?
What Could Possibily Go Wrong?
God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem
Urban 路 AGodAmongMen
aa per author this is smart mc
And that finally brings us back to the present, where I've got a corpse with a bloated stomach next to me while I worked to remove the ads on the screen.
God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem
Urban 路 AGodAmongMen
you aren't worthy Naruto
Removing himself from such thoughts, he returned his attention back to the two cages, while he might not be able to overpower these two terrors or inconvenience them for now, this was still his soul space and he could feel every movement in it.
Battle and Sex Is All A Primordial Fiend Needs
Fantasy 路 Bad_Bishop
Naruto 馃挴
He could barely make out two large cages as tall as the room whose bars were made of deep purple qi, and within these cages, he could feel terrifying qi signatures.
Battle and Sex Is All A Primordial Fiend Needs
Fantasy 路 Bad_Bishop
grammer problems , author should use paraphrasing tool from quillbot or use grammerly. use AI chat bots if needed
For now, I will use what power I can afford to expose to give you relevant memories you currently need from them.
Battle and Sex Is All A Primordial Fiend Needs
Fantasy 路 Bad_Bishop
kaguya
Thousands of years ago when qi was just introduced to this world, it was a common disability but a very rare case to see nowadays.
Battle and Sex Is All A Primordial Fiend Needs
Fantasy 路 Bad_Bishop
one of his many conquest
Faith in the Spiritual World was a delicate business. On top of other religions, all worshipped the Triumvirate: the Lord, the Weaver, and the Beast.聽
Netori: Reborn as the Human Aphrodisiac
Fantasy 路 Demonic_Paradise
yeah this is the most cliche plot, and the thing is when MC actually gains the strength the author takes one of the two routes; girl who wants to stay at her new place because they treated her well or she is taken by even higher power making MC work all over again.
"Akamana di Angra, Grand Priestess of the Angra Theocracy, thanks House Astalon for offering this young prodigy. I pledge to take care of Ishtar as my own daughter and raise her into a legend of the Purple Dawn Continent," the note said.聽
Netori: Reborn as the Human Aphrodisiac
Fantasy 路 Demonic_Paradise
here 2
On one of the slopes, the remnants of an old road stubbornly clung to the rocks. Here and there, weathered paved stones could be seen through the snow. To the right side of the road, a sheer cliff face rose as an impregnable wall. To the left, a silent black sea of nothingness indicated an endless fall. Strong winds crashed into the mountain over and over again, screaming in powerless rage.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy 路 Guiltythree
here
On one of the slopes, the remnants of an old road stubbornly clung to the rocks. Here and there, weathered paved stones could be seen through the snow. To the right side of the road, a sheer cliff face rose as an impregnable wall. To the left, a silent black sea of nothingness indicated an endless fall. Strong winds crashed into the mountain over and over again, screaming in powerless rage.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy 路 Guiltythree
Thankfully no typo this time
ch 0 7 Punishing a Voyeur (Yun Che x Cang Yue x Xia Qingyue)
Against the Gods (Untold Tales)
Book&Literature 路 Kirbyisgreen