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not a great movie? that movie was a beautiful masterpiece. 😍 one of my favorite movies I go back to watch every year

Read the first five chapters and so far I like it and can't wait to see more. Wish it had longer chapters 😎 I'll stick with it for a while. I'll be watching.

cucked in an instant 🤮. bro get those emotions out my boy not even his. All the people worried about him is feeling so forced and overdose of cringe. I swear if he gets on good terms with Harry and whatsherface ima throw up. it's aight I guess. Anyways please give him some backbone later on. also I feel like 2 much kindness ruins a story just me tho.

good concept but his rewards feel op like why is everything S and A at the start you should slow down unless it's a op at the start novel then nvm.

you should make ino the main love interest :3 but he should be more dominant in the relationship. Anyways story's good so far I dont have complaints other then I want more chapter >:) Also I'm dropping this if he becomes hokage level fast for no reason.

I like the concept of system but I dont like when people use it without knowing anything about skill leveling and game balance. I see systems as games so ofc u should have an advantage but it should be op just cuz u imagine ur self as the chracter just blowing everything away

I swear I saw a mangwah that was exactly this. I liked it but it was kinda cringy but maybe it was the art style that through me off. fight on@@@@@@@@

what is the original name