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Here is my revuew after reading 40 chapters. Quick review. The writing quality is decent, atleast enough so that you can almost always easily understand what is being said. It is a pretty interesting read if you are looking for a fun read were the mc is completely op, and basically face slaps everyone that looks down on him while expanding his harem. Although if you are going into this novel looking for a super unique in depth story, than sadly this isn't for you. Overall I would definitely say novel is worth reading if op mc harem is something you like. In depth review. Writing Quality 3.5/5. The book is definitely understandable 99% of the time, and there aren't a ton of grammar issues, but they do pop up once or twice a chapter. Although you can still generally understand what is being said, and it is no where near as bad as a lot of other novels on here. It also has a fairly basic Writing quality. Fairly basic in the sense that a lot of the description, and how the wording flows doesn't get all that advanced, though that could be said to be a good thing as I guess it makes it easier to understand. Story development 5/4. The easiest way to describe the story/plot is that it is a generic op mc, transmigration, harem novel. It has a bit of uniqueness to it, but if you come into the novel hoping for a completely brand new never before seen story then this is definitely not it. Though that is also not necessarily a bad thing either as it is a tried and true story type that many people like. So if you like an op mc that stands above everyone, having no real opposition, while getting all the chicks, then this is a great read. (I myself personally like that type of story so I might be a little biased) The pacing is good, not focusing on one particular scene for to long, while not rushing over everything way to fast for the most part. Character development 4/5. The characters are all fairly interesting, though sometimes there isn't quite enough backstory to some of them to really give you an emotional attachment to them . The mc is your typical cold overlord, and is definitely no beta male, who gets flustered over just being close to a girl. The mc definitely seems to more lean towards being more neutral, to lawfully neutral character. He doesn't go around just causing destruction and violence wherever he goes, but instead more leans towards being the type that if you get in his way, or try to harm him, he will have no problems beating you up. (note there has not been any smut so far, but it would appear that the novel is leaning towards having some further down the line after the mc builds his relationship with the female leads a bit more.) Updating stability 5/5. Nothing much to say here, so far it would appear that it is fairly stable with around 2 chapters a day. World background 4/5. The world background is okay, not a whole lot has been shown about the world they live in. It is typical urban superpower/cultivation type world. That is all for the review, and I think the novel is definitely worth reading if you don't have any problem with the flaws said above, and I hope to be able to continue read this book for many months to come.😁😁😁 Note to author. it would appear that you are leaning towards having incest, although that might not be the case, but if it is I would definitely put a warning in the description of whether or not this novel actually has incest, because just the hint of incest can turn many people off from your novel. Although I have personally have no problem with it, not everyone thinks the same. keep up the good work 👍👍👍

although I haven't read many chapters (only 14) here is what I have found. the story has no major grammatical errors, so it is easily understandable, and the story does seem to be interesting, but that is about it. the pacing is very bad, the mc is supposedly getting super powerfull items extremely fast, which breaks the whole idea of something being rare. if everything the mc gets is supposedly broken, then those things can only be considered normal to the reader. next is the rivals/enemies. the mc supposedly got many overpowered abilities and summons from the start, yet still gets his butt whooped by a guy that is supposed to have weaker abilities / items. so although this story is quite interesting to start, it is hard to really enjoy. my advice to the author is to just slow down a bit, flesh out the enemies, and the main characters allies a bit more so we have a deeper attachment to them. And the last thing is to make the mc work more for his items/abilities, free hand outs are nice and all, but if the mc receives basically everything quite easily (yes the mc doesn't necessarily receive them easily per say, but when he receives multiple super op items within a chapter or so without any real build up. that is what I mean by easily) then the reader doesn't get the satisfaction of the mc getting that hard earned reward, which in my opinion is the whole point of putting something like that into a novel. other than that I think it is still a pretty good novel overall.

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Very fast paced action packed novel, I mean there literally isn't a single second spent reading this that is boring. It has a fairly unique approach on the summoning system, making it all that much better. Very well written with almost no flaws in grammar. Very good novel, definitely worth a read.