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The movies name is legend.

I searched this movie and the characters of dhamal dhameel doesn't seem to match the one's on the fanfiction.So it would be better to put a face for the heroine or hero to visualise it better for the reader

you seems to have nerfed baldur and making him do things unnecessarily.There was simply no reason to go so far.

Iam a guy and like reading stories from a guys's perspective.And here is a guy who became a girl with the technology and the fact that it is a fictional worlds becoming a guy would be anyone's priority.so I am stumped why he is not doing that.

How would he know how much chakra a genin has even if he saw the anime doesn't mean he experienced it.Gengutsu would be useful you need chakra to disrupt it.it could be op

I would like to see this batman in Marvel.It could be an story.

I really like this fanfiction.But how would he have time to prepare if the war started sooner.

you really need to work on your grammar.

I'm batman

I'm batman

I must admit when I saw the simping of mc for blair even though you try to make it funny it was cringe.But as story progresses the character gets more interesting.i just hope he doesn't allow him self to be taken advantage from an emotional point or financially. There is a difference between being their for their friend and taking them shopping to their hearts content for a month with your money.

it feels weird reading this the mc gets powers so he quit his job and decided to be a hero.There is no motivation behind his decision.no financial security and he is in depth because of his medical bills and he seems more focused on saving people then his own problems.There is no exploration on his powers he just does it

may be travel to other dc universes.

There are magic users in invincible you can take their knowledge and powers.I hope he doesn't just hand over this powers to them Willy nilly make them desperate for it.

simp