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I like it more and more

Let him do what he wants, if you keep pushing him like this he will lose the desire to write, he likes to write several novels at the same time and as long as he doesn't abandon them, I have no problem.

Calling it a casual novel would not be correct, this novel has the capacity to become something very good and that you could read about other novels. My advice would be for the author to do what you (the author) mentioned; develop the MC based on his actions, that he may make some mistakes due to lack of experience/knowledge and then, when he has experience, he won't make them again... That doesn't mean that you are going to make him make a lot of mistakes and then show that he has a "development" if you could say, but I want an MC that is good enough to be respectable, with some things that he might fail at due to lack of experience, but in the end he will end up as a man that no one could call stupid. Lastly I want to point out that the way the novel is going now I like it, so don't worry, not to believe that all my likes are the best there is, but I think at least among many readers we share things in common that we like, as well as things we hate; things that drive us to read a novel and things that make us abandon it quickly.

Personally before I didn't share your opinion and I had a different one, that Scarlet Mage was the best, although I still consider her that she can be if she starts a good development, the last thing that has been shown of her is like a curious girl playing with her toy, or a fly testing the limits of a lion? It may be to get to know him better and see if he has humanity, but I feel like he overdid some things. Something still needs to be clarified though, just because Scarlet Mage has dropped a few points doesn't mean Hannah is now considered the "best". As the plot goes, the harem is the best thing that can happen in this specific novel, each one of them is like a different flavor and the two can complete each other with Riley. Pd: I wouldn't mind if Gary stays single (I'm fine with him having his hand manuela as a girlfriend), it looks better the way it is right now. I'm more interested in seeing Riley's interaction with the girls than his life.

Personally before I didn't share your opinion and I had another one, that Scarlet Mage was the best, although I still consider her that she can be if she starts a good development, the last thing that has been shown of her is like a curious girl playing with her toy, or a fly testing the limits of a lion.... Maybe it's to get to know him better and see if he has humanity, but I feel he overdid some things. Though still something should be made clear, just because Scarlet Mage has dropped a few points doesn't mean Hannah is now considered the "best", as the story goes the harem is the best thing that can happen in this novel, each of them is like a different flavor and the two can complete each other with Riley.

The problem with introducing friends to people who are introverts is often unpleasant, because they always end up forcing them to do things they don't want to do and slow down their development. Many of those who relate to people like this commonly share the cliche of being super nosy and wanting to manage how the MC acts in life, although sometimes that is good (if the MC knows what to do and he really has to fix that), most of the time they are his friends forcibly imposing their ideals on him. The best ones to make friends with him would be some who share his way of being and preferably girls.

Norman didn't notice the *** who was watching him.... Norman did not notice ****. This has happened more than once, one of the most annoying clichés...

The author abandons the novel and you read it on your own...

I think this is taking a better path than I thought it would. Riley knows what he is; a monster who finds pleasure in the suffering of others, but he has things important to him like all men, even those who have blood on their hands. Reading this I sometimes think that Riley may be more mature than he appears and that gives a plus of freshness to the novel. I prefer a thousand times this than those MCs according to demonic that are fashionable nowadays (Fang Yuan type). I hope you don't introduce things like pregnancy and that now... I say it because someone mentioned it in the comments and I don't want you to get the bad idea, at the rate you're going, you're doing well.

I thought the same thing as soon as I read it, it's the typical cliche of a person notices the MC out of nowhere....

It is very good... The more you advance in the reading, the more you want to see the result of his plans. Thanks for entertaining me author, I hope more people get to know this great novel.

Good chapter, Victor's interaction with Yuki I love it.

Thanks for the answer, I will wait for the development of your future plans. If you execute them well we could have a much better novel than the one we already have...

There's no turning back now so since, I hope I like it enough to be able to read it even with this.... About Diana I already knew but we have to be honest, that fetish of hers is sick, plus she's already had many partners that in themselves are not shotas so being a shota with her for me instead of adding a point, it subtracts from it, because it's pure love for her weird fetish.

Can you make this not like a coincidence for Leo and he himself analyze the things that happened to him recently and realize what King was trying to do (and make him pay) I don't want it to turn into a super dense MC.

Well, I have to be honest.... I didn't like the decision to leave him looking like a boy, I thought he was finally going to start playing the room with his waifus, but now even if he still attracts them I'm not so much of the shota taste