- 0 d Continuous Writing
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Dragon_Nexus
male LV 2I slack off at work writing about the stories I go to sleep imagining at night... English is not my native tongue.
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3yr
Commented This is good, but could use some polish. Some pros: - Sentence structure is excellent - Premise is not forced - MC is very relatable Some cons: - His parents seem kind of scatter brained, especially his dad. Supporting characters should be just as relatable as the MCs.
ch 0 1 1. Rebirth
Tales of Demons and Gods - Starfire
Book&Literature · Sect_Master_69
3yr
Commented The name's Tonic, Jin Tonic.
"My son Jin, you just fell down the stairs and hit your head really hard. You were unconscious for a full hour now. I am glad you finally woke up."
Tales of Demons and Gods - Starfire
Book&Literature · Sect_Master_69
Actually made me laugh out loud. Talk about a shitty situation
ch 10 Chapter 7: The father of my brother
Tales of Dragons, Demons and Gods
Book&Literature · Dragon_Nexus