Christina_Fortune

1mth

Commented

Didn't it say that Ling Tian didn't have a tail? How can he transform?

"Vegeta, liberas una luna artificial en el cielo. Broly y Paragus, yo y yo nos transformaremos primero en Super Saiyan 4", dijo Ling Tian.

Dragon Ball: Si me matan, seré más fuerte[Spanish]

Anime & Comics · Copia_San

Christina_Fortune

3mth

Commented

What does "RFL" mean?

RFL: 27

The Great Leviathan Warrior

Fantasy · darkultima96

Christina_Fortune

4mth

Replied to OGVipex

I like this a lot. Please continue. Please don't drop the story.

Dragon Ball Z: Cheat to the Top

Anime & Comics · OGVipex

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. By the way, what happened to the update schedule? Also, if you haven't continued with the chapters after the current chapters posted, how about posting chapters involving everyone present that can currently see Max and his reincarnations seeing his past experiences. Maybe you can show them a day of each of the souls past including Max's current soul when it gets sucked into that portal. I don't know if that's the way it was supposed to go but it's just an idea. Like maybe the last day Bardock and Cumber were in the present before the fall of Planet Vegeta for Cumber or a day when he's working on killing off an entire planet with his team? I think that should make it something interesting to read. But this is only an idea for if and I repeat if you haven't already written up your continued chapters already. Just have fun with it, but please, please, please don't drop it.

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Christina_Fortune

6mth

Replied to Aht

Hey, when are you going to update the story? I'd like to read more please.

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Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

I love this story. When are you going to update? I'm excited.

ch 0 1 Return to Monke

Space Monkey in Marvel

Movies · KojiSan

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

Please more chapters soon. It's been at least a year since this note was written.

I'm not done with this, just got lost on the road of life, literallly, I'll start posting soon, I'll know actions speak louder than words, so you'll see more chapters from now on. Thanks for waiting.

Goku, Naruko, and Rose

Anime & Comics · Aaron_Harvey_7275

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

What's a "scout"? At least in this. It doesn't make any sense. Do you mean "scalp"?

As The water Massaged my scout and ran down my body, I closed my eyes; The thoughts from my mind were completely washed away for this brief moment.

An Unlikely Combination [Marvel/ Dc/ Dragon Ball]

Anime & Comics · ElliotJackson2

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

I think Rebecca should be the daughter's name, not the mother's. "Rebecca grabbed her daughter and headed to her car back home."

Rebecca grabbed her daughter and headed to her car back home. "What was that all about mom?" Rebecca asked confused, "I will tell you when you are old enough to understand sweetie." Her mother replied, the deadpanned look still on her face.

An Unlikely Combination [Marvel/ Dc/ Dragon Ball]

Anime & Comics · ElliotJackson2

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

So, I'm pretty sure you don't mean "foreheadhead". Is it just supposed to be "forehead"? Or maybe "head" instead?

"So let me get this straight." I sighed rubbing my foreheadhead, "You mean to tell me that because I completely demolished your Uncle who is the king of the moon or something, and the entire army of moon-men; that makes me King by combat or something?"I asked, in slight disbelief but understanding.

An Unlikely Combination [Marvel/ Dc/ Dragon Ball]

Anime & Comics · ElliotJackson2

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Replied to ElliotJackson2

It's okay. It's still a good story. Please continue writing this story and please don't drop it. I'm so excited to read more.

I shook my head, Not right now...I must focus on training... But here...it's not safe for me to use Key Blasts...I moved in a circular motion and a magical golden portal slowly formed in front of me as I stepped in it to the moon, I sensed multiple presences in it, not only that but I also felt something within me shift, a primal urge within me...

An Unlikely Combination [Marvel/ Dc/ Dragon Ball]

Anime & Comics · ElliotJackson2

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

Continue this story. +1

Do you wish for me to continue this story?

An Unlikely Combination [Marvel/ Dc/ Dragon Ball]

Anime & Comics · ElliotJackson2

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

Thank you so much for all your hard work, and congratulations on getting your old laptop cleaned up and being able to use your old account soon again.

On the bright side I am getting my old laptop cleaned up, so I should be able to use my other account too soon again, Have a good rest of the day.

An Unlikely Combination [Marvel/ Dc/ Dragon Ball]

Anime & Comics · ElliotJackson2

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

"before she"... I think there's a part missing here. Please fix it. Good read by the way. I really enjoy it.

She slowly regained her composure, before she

An Unlikely Combination [Marvel/ Dc/ Dragon Ball]

Anime & Comics · ElliotJackson2

Christina_Fortune

6mth

Commented

Pretty sure "key blasts" are supposed to be "ki blasts" but I could be wrong. Anyways, love the story. It's fun to read. Keep up the good work.

I shook my head, Not right now...I must focus on training... But here...it's not safe for me to use Key Blasts...I moved in a circular motion and a magical golden portal slowly formed in front of me as I stepped in it to the moon, I sensed multiple presences in it, not only that but I also felt something within me shift, a primal urge within me...