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Ok now…. We are going a tad to far author-nim… age jokes at 6. thatS a Strech for an insult
"I always thought you were older than me, so I kept calling you older sister. It turns out that we're the same age." Tan Mo put her hands in front of her chest. "I'm sorry, but I couldn't tell."
Urban · As If Dawn
"We've thought about it." Tan Jinsheng leaned forward and whispered to Tan Mo, "If you two aren't in the same class, although she will probably still trouble you, she will have to exert a lot of effort to do so. However, if you two are in the same class, establish a good relationship with everyone except her. If she tries to trouble you, you can lead other people to isolate her, ostracize her, and make her feel miserable!"
Urban · As If Dawn
So funny. anyone with younger siblings knows. we can hang at home but your not big enough to chill with me and my friends. Not only did i JUST tell you to calm your reaching stair climbing family down but now you show up with fill montain gear on Expecting me to be your stEp stool, nah sis not today.
Was it because of Yuan Zhengwen and Yuan Keqing?
Urban · As If Dawn
Ughh. If its just a job Then Who cares if you dont get It bacK. it seems KQ is fine showing up univited to there house sooooo, how meek and submissive is she to momo. Meek and submissive people would’nt crash a play date lets not even talk about the B-Day party. He living in the province of delusional In C country
"How did I betray them? This is just a small matter, and their family didn't lose anything! They keep saying they're helping us out all the time, but didn't they just arrange a job for me? They keep talking about it, making sure that we won't forget it. They forced Keqing to be meek and submissive towards Tan Mo, inferior to her in everything. You let Keqing stay with Tan Mo all day long, but have you forgotten that Keqing is even younger than Tan Mo? Keqing needs to call Tan Mo older sister!
Urban · As If Dawn
It is. My sister is my sister. What she does woIh what i give her is her rIght as my sister, if it profits he husbamd great of not oh well.
Xu Mingzhen quickly added, holding her sister's hand, "Mingjing, don't worry. Our relationship won't change."
Urban · As If Dawn
Yeah author! can we flush out why hes so randomly nice. I mean based on this discriptuon, he really wouldnt have cared about a fist meetings gift. I can see the, him seeing the white loutus nonsense making him protective of momo. But to this extent …. running and hugging he… highly sus character develOpment
Why did Wei Zhiqian treat that little girl so well?
Urban · As If Dawn
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Dear Author, if we are using English names it’s really awkward to read it as the Asians use their names. In English while we do introduce ourselves/characters with first and last names. We refer to one another with only the first name. So after introducing Evelyn Ford, From then on we’d just say Evelyn, especially when others are speaking to her. Unless your trying to emphasize an extrem emotion like anger, awe, shock only then a person may use the full name. Also, you wouldn’t call her “Ford” if your being formal or respectful the person speaking would say Miss/Ms. Ford or even Miss/Ms Evelyn as she’s unmarried, Mrs would be used if married. To make the writing more natural with an English naming system I would suggest dropping the usage of both first and last name and just using the first names of characters after the initial introduction. If your trying to show the person is being respectful just add the title Miss/Ms/Mrs to either first or last name. Use Mr. For males. Love the novel thus far, thanks so much for your time [img=Heart eyes]
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