You have already written yourself too deep. I like the idea of a plot focused story but if that is what you want to write it would be best to start from scratch. That being said I am already invested in this story and would love it if you would see it through to the end.
Harem all day e'ry day(Yes).
Anime & Comics · Einlion
If he has the code then he should loose his geass ability in exchange for immortality.
I already got some muscles. I thought the body wouldn't be able to change after becoming immortal by accepting the code. But my body got more fit as I do exercise.
Anime & Comics · soldklad
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DxD
DC: The Enchanter
Anime & Comics · The_Greedy_Frog