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The story so far is interesting, if he is Klaus' son he shouldn't be a hybrid of a sefador and a werewolf, but a canonical character who would be much more interesting, the unborn son of Stefan and Valerie, technically Stefan as a duplicate of a wizard powerful has the potential to be a wizard, since for a duplicate to exist it needs to be a descendant of the original, which in this case is the other species of wizards whose magic was excluded from the universe because it could create true immortality, and one of the ways to make this child of powerful Stefan is to steal Silas's magic, technically Damon should also have the potential to be a wizard since he is also a descendant of Silas or one of Silas' relatives. I don't know if it is necessary to be a direct descendant of the original or if the duplicate can come from a relative who is not a descendant of the original, I finally liked his story but there are very few decent stories from the TVD, TO and legacies universe

I was already a little hesitant because of the MC's main ability, which is a summoning style, which probably makes the MC in itself useless, but now the MC will only have thirty percent of the knowledge, if the knowledge is in chronological order, it means that the MC only remembers one more than the beginning of the story, which means he's barely reached Shippuden in knowledge, all the most important information is almost exclusively at the end of the story. Anyway, I probably won't read this, a reincarnated person without knowledge is useless.

Finally he will be cured, so Batman's actions will have no consequences for him, as he will continue with his routine, he should be trapped naked in a dark room while other heroes take his territory.

I didn't like the MC, he seems to have less IQ than the dog, he sees various elements of the DC universe and still doesn't know where he is, it seems that despite his half-Kryptonian body the MC didn't inherit the brain and I don't like this inconsistency and MC dumb.

DC's most ridiculous invention, the dog with Kryptonian powers, is very ridiculous, and it looks like it's going to be used.

Honestly, it sucks, the author made the MC do the same thing as the original Kai so as not to change anything from the canon, out of nowhere the guy turns into a crazy psychopath, if it was a matter of staying young for the canon he simply could have become a vampire or in the case of a heretic, the MC has no reason to follow the same path as the original Kai.

I don't have patience for this type of MC, the guy just walks around complaining, he knows there's a war coming and doesn't do anything to prepare, apart from this idiocy of inevitable fate, one of the worst types of lazy and stupid MC.

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No, I wouldn't lose the weight, examples of this in real life and with diets and training specialized in losing weight, everything that Robert doesn't have, plus he hunts in groups and with his weight he probably just finishes the animal and it's not an activity So physically demanding is a hunting party on horseback, a good example of his physical condition is that he got tired going down a staircase to see Lyanna's tomb, and the details of his battle scene as he runs up carrying a body and then fighting enemies using two hammers your resistance should have ended before Jon's, having said all that the story is yours I'm just commenting on what I didn't like or found realistic about his physical condition but hey it's fantasy.

Dude, 6 to 7 months is not even close to enough for someone who lived completely overweight for 14 years, he would need to lose all the fat to start gaining muscle other than through weight training exercises at that time to accelerate weight loss, honestly it's impossible for him being able to fight the way shown in this chapter he wouldn't have as much resistance, speed and strength, and on top of that he fought using two hammers in this chapter which would make him tire even faster, I know you don't want to leave Jon Op but there's no point in doing that if you're going to boost his enemies, the battle itself was good but Robert's discrepancy ruined the chapter for me

Honestly, Jon shouldn't have had so much trouble taking down King Robert, besides Robert barely getting back in shape after more than fourteen years of lack of physical activity and training, Robert also had to first lose weight to start gaining muscle. and he's been fighting for longer, I think this fight should have ended by now and to give Robb some space you made a mistake, the dialogue between Ashara and Jon also needs work it's ridiculous for him to say he's going to die because it's his fault besides him having children and that doesn't solve anything, if he knows just a little about Robert's personality, he would know that neither his children nor his wives would escape Robert's fury, they would probably be raped by Robert and the soldiers as a form of revenge and to humiliate the Targaryens.

In fact, the muscles gained through pure bodybuilding are different from those of a person who, for example, gained doing martial arts or using a sword, probably muscles gained through martial training are probably slightly superior for fighting, but the problem is that it takes longer to gain such muscles, probably some years, at least I remember what the advantages were of an experienced soldier from the Middle Ages and a novice, what the difference was between an ancient soldier and a modern one.

I wanted the vampire girl from the Volturi Clan who has the ability to cause pain to others or Alice or Roseli

If he's a vampire why is he chewing on the guy's insides that doesn't make any sense, I don't mind him killing an innocent person but he's more of a Ghoul than a vampire, I can stand the idea of ​​a vampire but eating human flesh is already too much for me. me.

I'm skeptical about this story, there are things about Chinese cultivation and normally this type of story is rubbish, well the MC doesn't have the behavior of a young master which is good but I'm still undecided but I think I'll read some more and give it a chance .

Crackfic, the general idea is good but it's very rushed and it seems like it's going to be one of those stories where the MC keeps solving everyone's problems, of course him killing killgrave was cool, but the saving Tony thing seems like a waste of time, the whole thing Making a company is also very repetitive, other negative points.

I honestly don't understand why the dumbledor didn't tell him about his family, it's also kind of annoying this density of Japanese MC, it seems like it's what I read in the comments forced plot for hatred against pure-blood wizards, if all pure-blood wizards were really prejudiced, so even without voldmort Harry would have lost, and considering that most of Harry's allies were pure-blood wizards and of the circle of closest people only Hermione was Muggle-born, then I consider it ridiculous to say in such a general way that all Purebloods are evil.

I understand your point, I also don't like that much about original works, I like fantasy, magic, unknown realms and mystical creatures, whether good, bad or neutral, I like pure and unadulterated romance, for George, pessimism is reality and always the present and the future followed the worst path, he even runs away from reality to the point that there is almost no happiness in his books, to a certain extent in his books it is not happiness but a certain momentary relief after a gigantic mountain of bad things which he ends up running away from his purpose, despite it being fantasy to follow as close to reality as possible, life is not just disaster after disaster.