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After reading the latest chapter (Chapter 16 as of posting this review), I've come to realise that this story has basically went downhill and I just can't help but to myself from reading this story as it's gotten to the point of complete bullshit to me. I feel that abandoning this story is the best choice for me but unlike those asshole reviewers who just say "THIS STORY IS SHIT" and run-off I will try my best to give my justifications. the Good: 1. The word count for each chapter is pretty good and the updates were somewhat frequent and that to me is a plus 2. The batman persona, despite the cringey stuff (like "you have failed this city" was copied from Arrow and also cringey, even if it is a cool line) was actually a good thing. You did shit with him and even killed off some ****ed characters so all was good with this one. But now we get to- The Bad: 1. The emancipation stuff kinda threw me off. usually stuff like that emancipation is like if you're in a abusive family. In this case his family loves him and it you're only doing it just so to beat bad guys and distance yourself from that. I just feel so confused with this one. The familial loves seems to only be one-sided with this one. Keeping a secret life from the parents tends to lead to some bad stuff as well (if peter parker's life has anything to say). 2. Side characters in this story are barely developed and don't even have any screen-time. I don't know if you've noticed but your current character is only talking with an AI and not anybody else. Aside from maybe peter he doesn't talk to anybody and he pretty much abandoned MJ and Felicia and stuff like that instead of actually maintaining contact. this was just sad honestly. The whole-loner mc thing kinda falls apart after a while you know. 3. The whole Superman persona imo absolutely unnecessary and completely forced. There was no need to go the whole superman route and throughout reading this story any and all reasons you have given me did not seem even remotely satisfying. 4. And now, the BIGGEST offender as to why I can't deal with this story, the MC's abilities. Do you know that there's a thing called a "Limit". I didn't have an issue when you got spider powers. Or when you obtained the mutant powers. Or when you obtained both the Hulk and Juggernaut's powers (at this point you should've just stopped cuz you were already powerful as is). But then you got the speedforce and to me at that point was when you should've stopped. But then you wanted to get greedy and copied thors, the other Asgardians and the finally FUCKING ODIN. That was honestly a step too far. First off it should've been impossible for you to obtain the odinforce cuz it ain't as cookie cutter as the any of the other superpowers and frankly should've been impossible. It's the kind of power capable of contending with some the strongest cosmic beings in the universe if not the multiverse heck. And if this universe closely resembled that of the comics then frankly there should've been no way for you to have survived that interaction with odin cuz when it comes to odin he's basically stone-cold. Something like the thing you just did would be more than enuf for him to completely annihilate without a second thought. Frankly that interaction with Odin was more than enough for me to call out "FUCKING BULLSHIT" and rightfully so. The story just kind of went purely downhill and I can't help but describe this story as nothing more than "Well-Written Shit"