Badges 7
Moments 452
Yeeep this story becoming boring...
ch 22 Chapter 22 Are you done? Because it's my turn
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Dude Summoned Beast IV
Unaware that when the summon was complete with them being transported they missed seeing indeed a small creature hiding underneath Medea's cape named Cath Plug, The Beast of Gaia, or simply the adorable Fou.
THE MULTIVERSE: GAMER PATH
Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
But I have to wait an entire day! Because of you I read same chapter three times while waiting for the next one anyway great chapter and you said you finished this arc already I hope you collected skills and noble phantasms from servants if not it will be wasted most importantly Durandal from Gate of Babylon has some wish granting power not getting that noble phantasm will be huge loss
ch 90 Chapter 90: Fate/Zero
THE MULTIVERSE: GAMER PATH
Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
Jovami you're really unfair such a cliffhanger is heresy
ch 90 Chapter 90: Fate/Zero
THE MULTIVERSE: GAMER PATH
Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
Extremis has same Physical boost with more higher stats than Captain also technically Extremis user can think far faster than any human with how synapses work
Cap frowned. This opponent was as strong as him, but with the added ability to wield fire at extreme temperatures. Realizing a direct confrontation wouldn't end well, he dashed for his shield.
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Currently only confirmed warlock is Hector
Leaving through the portal Clind sighs slightly annoyed muttering taking a sip of the tea he prepared, "Sigh… he could've at least answered my question. Oh, well I met weird people such as Warlocks or Witches. I'll chalk it up to their crazy shenanigans."
THE MULTIVERSE: GAMER PATH
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Techniqually he can use Lion's Pride at full potential like Regulus with using Time Stop at the same time since no time passes in time stop
The second ability of the Authority of Greed, [My World].
THE MULTIVERSE: GAMER PATH
Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
There is physique of someone wielding butcher knife and Neiji Lockhart's fist technique
Licking his left hand Rui's eyes soon fade as her whole existence soon becomes forgotten with Mash obtaining skill experience in his [Brawler Mastery] and [Martial Arts Mastery] into higher levels gaining the skills [Leaper] and [Carnivorous Beast].
THE MULTIVERSE: GAMER PATH
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If possible save if not give her a final rest which let her have her peace
Ah, I almost forgot... I'm currently writing the Fate Arc and was left with a dilemma writing a chapter with Jack the Ripper. Should the MC spare the assassin of Black Jack the Ripper or end her misery?
THE MULTIVERSE: GAMER PATH
Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
15-16 doesn't mean this immature or naive MC has body of a teenager and mind of a preteen most of the time
The reason why I had Mash come to the Seven Deadly Sins World was simply for character development and experience. Keep this in mind that his still a young teen of 15 or 16 years of age so he can be easily impressed with other things by experiencing the Multiverse firsthand.
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Then He just can give his heart to Beatrice or Patrishe like Regulus and become semi immortal like him, you just don't want to make him OP in all stories or make him too OP which causes this but after fate he should be OP or after fate if he returns to Seven Deadly Sins's he must become OP. With his current powers becoming this weak is unreasonable
Even with his Authority of Greed, [Lion's Pride] he only has 5 SECONDS of invincibility, and overuse of this skill could cause him to have heart failure. The MC is being cautious in fights and trying to overly rely on his trump card if he can help it.
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That is fanon which is you're right but that's not what I said
[AN: I read some other fanfics of Naruto, and there authors often use the term of 'unlocking chakra', and this is strange to me. In my understanding there is nothing to 'unlock' about chakra, the problem is to sense and control it. Then when you start controlling it and spend it, your body starts to regenerate it and the whole thing is like muscles, the more you use it – the more it grows.
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
In anime they stated you need to get used to manipulate chakra in your body which is what I meant, kneeding is that process
[AN: I read some other fanfics of Naruto, and there authors often use the term of 'unlocking chakra', and this is strange to me. In my understanding there is nothing to 'unlock' about chakra, the problem is to sense and control it. Then when you start controlling it and spend it, your body starts to regenerate it and the whole thing is like muscles, the more you use it – the more it grows.
Naruto: Time Traveler
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
And here I thought he would gain commandments and Seven Deadly Sins's Magics such a disappointment anyway Guila and Jericho is left behind it could be interesting such a sad ending
Both nodded in agreement returning to business. Unaware it would be the last they would see Mash vanishing without a trace and no warning for some time….
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It is a lie that they used to promote Shrek Academy
"The academy has admitted sixty-two students in total, but only fourteen have graduated. These fourteen, after leaving the academy, all became renowned figures. The most outstanding among them is now the youngest elder in the Spirit Hall, second only to the Pope.
Douluo Dalu (Soul Land): Villain Life Simulator
Anime & Comics · Firesight
Dude SSS Suicide Hunter is a great story but Theo is too OP for that world even Seo Joo Heon's world is more fit for Theo
Theo decided to choose the world he wanted to go to next. He had been reading another tower manhwa, "SSS-Class Suicide Hunter," and thought about going there. However, it wasn't a good idea for now. Agares had just left one tower; it wouldn't be good for him to enter another one right away. Now, Theo was worried about the world he would enter next. If he did this, he would most likely die; even his soul could vanish from reality.
Reincarnation in DxD with wishes
Anime & Comics · emir_adar
Well dude sucking researched it for god knows how many years so it's least expected and that means he can gain skills far better than even best skills
As for soul skills, he wasn't particularly concerned. After all, it was just a special way of energy manipulation. Once he understood the principles behind it, with his medical expertise and combat understanding, he could find many combat techniques better than ordinary soul ring skills.
Douluo Dalu (Soul Land): Villain Life Simulator
Anime & Comics · Firesight
Is it Comic or MCU if it is Comics he can absorb other similar entities and grow stronger but if it is MCU he don't has much to do and just chill around without doing nothing which will become boring. If you choose comics he can make deal with strong beings and have his version of a world just he rules like how eternity and infinity rules Earth 616 or choose a strong world like 616, 65, Ultimate or au timeline of your creation with certain elements of few worlds but mainly focusing of one world's aspects more. And you ask for world Ideas I have few of them but ones that I have in mind are ORV, Solo Leveling, Fate(it has several different timelines), Overlord(not sure about this one MC is too OP already), Tensura(definitely needs to go) these are I have in my mind currently most fit for MC
ch 54 floor 20
Reincarnation in DxD with wishes
Anime & Comics · emir_adar
Length is short, interactions are so minimum, concept was good but MC, other characters and world started to become idiotic, less realistic and empty
So, I'm reaching out once more to see if there's anything specific that you think could be improved. Are there grammar mistakes that are bothering you? Are the chapters too short or too long? Are there any issues within the story that you think need addressing? Or is there something else entirely that's on your mind?
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