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Overall this was a great novel, my only gripe is that after chapter 1000 you can tell that they knew the end was near for this novel and it seemed that it became more of an after thought vs the rest of the novels in the universe that they're writing. I will absolutely recommend this novel though even with my minor issue. Read it and enjoy!

This is great all the way up until about chapter 680. At that point the author basically said fuck it I don't care to even try to give this a good ending just piss all over any of the world building or character development and just take a steaming dump on it. Would have been better to just drop the book before writing the last ~40 chapters to give us that trash.

I wonder how many chapters the author is going for. Though this does make me a bit more interested in the book.

Was overall a great story and we'll worth the read. My gripes are that the main character has a ton of deus ex happen which can sometimes be forgivable but it gets a bit excessive. My favorite part is that the author did two things amazingly right, first the romance while added in actually served a purpose and wasn't just a throw away thing for the lulz. And second he actually made the characters (not just the main character but just about all the central characters) have a somewhat believable personality and not just always in awe of the MC because MC plot armor.

Hey @truedawn, How many chapters are you aiming for in total?

Amazing read 100% worth reading as it's interesting enough to actually want to finish. It has an interesting leveling system and pretty good world building. A little bit of deus ex in terms of story progression but nothing worth completely hating. The romance is more than a bit forced but forgivable as part of the personality of the character comes from the repercussions of said romance (no more said because spoilers) And love the way the character is careful to bring knowledge from one world to the other in terms of mass change but doesn't give a single flying frick about memes/pop culture references.

It's a good book, you'll enjoy the read.

Great story, 100%reccomended, enjoy the read.

Dude is moving (check the discord 😁)

Was great up until about chapter 750. then turned to utter shite. Has a semi interesting system, the dual cultivation thing was cringy as heck both times. The romantic plot was worthless in both the system side as well as the normal side. A lot of deus ex for the story progression.

Is actually still ongoing... Just have to go w W W. r e a d w n . C o m/e/action/ShowInfo.php?classid=1&id=3003 Great little story though.

Is this actually done? Like there's two chapters locked behind premium so I'm not sure if it's done so I don't wanna actually start reading it yet...

I think it's done as he hasn't updated in like a month but who knows because I'm not willing to throw money at the last 25 chapters .... Extra words for minimum.

Read this novel . No seriously read it. It's actually really good the only issue that you will run into is a few spelling errors or awkward wording choices .

This quote literally turns into the worst one piece fanfic ever after about 70 chapters. Like literally threw out the baby and the bathwater to move over to that trash.