EIyon

EIyon

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Why bathe in the blood of your enemies when you could create a machine that could bathe in your enemies' blood for you?

2019-12-13 Joined Global
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EIyon
EIyon
1 months ago
Posted

Counter balance the loser who ain’t even get past the synopsis. + I really like your story so far 👍 keep it up.

EIyon
EIyon
2 months ago
Replied to delnavaz_nirvana

They have a whole genre with average-looking protagonists. It’s called isekai.

Honestly… I was very handsome in this life. That didn't mean I was ugly in my previous one.

Reincarnated as the Final Villain’s Vessel

Reincarnated as the Final Villain’s Vessel

Fantasy · Nameless94

EIyon
EIyon
2 months ago
Posted

I just got to chapter 37, and I have to say, so far it’s pretty good. It’s not overly edgy while also not being a slopfest where the protagonist gets pandered to in every way, shape, and form. Aren feels less like a regressed person and more like a kid who has matured after absorbing his future self’s memories, which I think is a good thing since it makes everything less weird and leaves room for him to grow as a character. The writing quality is good, and while I have noticed an issue here and there, they have not broken the story’s flow. I love the characters so far. I love Aren. I love Lily. I love Luna. I liked Abby, and Captain Eric is one of the very rare “responsible adult” types in cultivation stories. The world-building so far is great. A lot of authors tend to dump a ton of information about the world and its systems in the first 30 chapters instead of letting us experience it firsthand alongside the characters, and so far this has not been the case. I can’t say much about the story yet since I’m only on chapter 37, but so far it’s a pretty generic start, and I believe this aspect could either make this story a gem or leave it as just something fun to read. I know is this deserves at least top 3 in fresh.

EIyon
EIyon
11 months ago
Commented

As someone whose favorite literary devices are similes and metaphors, I have absolutely loved your writing so far.

Then, as if remembering himself, he exhaled sharply. The softness evaporated. The scowl returned, like armor snapping into place.

MHA: Copy and Paste

MHA: Copy and Paste

Anime & Comics · Phizzel

EIyon
EIyon
12 months ago
Replied to Cronos_217

Aunque estoy de acuerdo contigo, hay que mirarlo con el entendimiento de que todos piensan en él como si fuera un niño.

Guts had thrown a full-force punch into the earth. A shockwave cracked through the cemetery floor like lightning, sending fragments of stone and dirt flying.

Naruto: Reborn with the Template System

Naruto: Reborn with the Template System

Anime & Comics · Arthorain

EIyon
EIyon
1 years ago
Commented

A Shotacon priestess using Minor Healing.

EIyon
EIyon
1 years ago
Commented

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Shirou gave a faint smile. "Maybe. If fate allows."

Fate x Danmachi: The Sword Prince (eng)

Fate x Danmachi: The Sword Prince (eng)

Anime & Comics · Rayish_

EIyon
EIyon
1 years ago
Commented

Good work. I originally wanted him to end up with both of them, but I'm fine with the way you structured this. Love the story so far.

So, for those who wanted a monogamous relationship—perfect, no harem!

Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic

Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic

TV · Nathe07

EIyon
EIyon
3 years ago
Commented

I ’m sorry

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"Can't we play a little longer, big brother Edward?" One of the children asks for hopefully. Others also look at him hopefully.

Pirates in Multiverse

Pirates in Multiverse

Anime & Comics · In_cest

EIyon
EIyon
3 years ago
Commented

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No! It was something else. Those eyes looked dead but at the same time, they were so very alive. Just staring at them, Taelar could feel the emotions of curiosity, wonder, passion and so much more coming alive once more within himself.

Immortal in Game of Thrones/ASOIAF: An Adventure

Immortal in Game of Thrones/ASOIAF: An Adventure

TV · PyteWriter