Webnovel Author: missmisslala - Novel Collection

I really like it. The story is awesome. Its very relatable on some poimta for me w/ the foster care and being separated from siblings the story's flow is nice I cant wait to see what Nate discovers and how she handles it and if her brother Max will be getting involved. This has a lot of potential w/ some minor editing and some more dialogue this will be a great book! I was hopimg for another chapter four wasn't enough I hopw you will check out my original works too Im always lookimg for any advice thats what we have to do for each other as authors so we can get better at what we love to do p.s pls update soon

Overall was a good reading. The book has potential my only conflict with it was it needed to be edited it was confusing with some of it. But overall I enjoyed it. There were lots of details and it caught my attention quickly.

I will be aiming to update 3 to 4xs a week. definitely ever monday and friday.

So far at where I'm at it's really good. It can get pretty relatable too. The story line has a nice flow not too complicated for you to follow. And I'm really rooting for my girl the mc she gets enough issues with just her mom alone to top it off w/ working hard in fashion and men to add to that. I love the small details too like the doreamon pajamas small details always keep me more interested in a story.

Thank you Im glad you enjoyed this one. The one I'm working on currently is The Kings Lost Fiance

Best comic/manga ever honestly but I really wish that Parker had his cubs first he should have been her first spouse he did an amazing job of taking care of her I hope Muir will be good and not hurt her cubs once they are born but I found it weird cuz Curtis said Parker was doing a horrible job at getting her pregnant so is it someone else or no ...