you should cut the fillers
ch 105 Chapter 17
Anime & Comics · absurdmorbidity
at least have 1500 words in a chapter. these feel too short.
ch 21 Chapter 21
Anime & Comics · Carl_Joe
hay! I caught up!!! some friendly suggestions to the Author: Please make your paragraphs longer. Paragraphs are so unnecessarily separated that it looks like a poem rather than a novel. And you should avoid writing sound effects... it's not for novels.. just friendly suggestions.
ch 72 Chapter 72
Anime & Comics · TheEnlightenedSage
a very long rant. but agreed
ch 230 Chapter 230
Anime & Comics · EroJaki
John Doe? why is his name used for for the unidentified dead? is it just for reference?
ch 0 3 Ghost Whisperer
Realistic · Vanlauredel
I'm truly disappointed... I kinda wanted a full on rap battle between the two. But you could have any least written B's POV in rhymes, that would have made this a KILLER chapter to read.
ch 133 Fight Against the Eight Tails…
Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
a writer shouldn't have to go out of his way to justify his characters... specially not outside the story
ch 117 First Day of training
Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
that story did seem oddly familiar... I was wondering where it came from...
ch 49 Dying as a Nameless Casualty
Anime & Comics · HolyJoker
morgan wasn't a captain until three years before puffy set sail...
This book has been deleted.
info dump....
ch 96 Bert and his trump card
Anime & Comics · CrazyGuest
release more
That Chill Mofo Is A Killer/Gamer(Coming Soon!)
Anime & Comics · ShaggyJoestar69