Webnovel Author: MrAkillies - Fanfic Collection

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Thnx for the chapter, I'll be back again for more chapters release ❤️👍

Why suddenly it became Chinese cultivation plot 😭😭😭💔

OK I'm out, I'm here for a dragon story. Not for this turning human kind of stuff. 😭💔

Kinda not loving where this is going I was hoping to get more character development for the Mc but all I'm getting is a lot of cliffhanger about something your trying to cook😔, BTW thnx for the chapter ❤️😭. Try not to involve more of shin and hyou, I'm here for the Mc not them🥰.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

It's good 👍❤️ Also is the pairing of this universe still the same??? I kind of like the shikamaru x temari pairing so I hope their is no changes in the pairing criteria 😭

BTW a full walk across the united state will take anywhere from five to seven months (give or take). This is with planned routes and before the apocalypse so you should use this information to write the story. Goodluck author ❤️👍

I think that u should implement time skip during traveling it will make the evolution of the fungus to different stages more realistic as no way they evolved this quick in the story so a time skip of 1 to 5 months of traveling would've been sufficient to explain the evolution plus after the skip I think that it's better u show more scenes of bonding and survival skill both of them are learning in the apocalypse to develop more of the story. A little mix of slice of life, romance and action would be nice.

Thnx for the chapter, I hope the Mc would start focusing on more of his natural affinities in magic like the poison element (at the moment he only uses wind but he is a green dragon that is born with poison element why waste his potential ??? ), in fact you can try making him combine both the poison and wind. Example would be that any wind attack he does also causes poison. But regardless of what u decide I will support you author ❤️👍

Since the time skip of Sarah dead in the game to point of starting the game is 20 year so it's kind of possible if u make ellie a child of the union of Sarah and Bruce.

It would've been great if ellie is the child of Sarah and Bruce. And they did not get united with Joel until the moment of the last of us game started. Alternatively they could also start the last of us by tracking down ellie that got separated from them and consiquently they found Joel with ellie??? Whatever choice u make would be interesting author. Thnx for the chapter❤️👍

Please don't make him young forever as no beard and goatee for his age makes him feel like a boy toy. Fatherly transformation is needed.

Xiao Ming should already be an uncle as he has 2 children already so it's kind of weird reading him as a brother type character as he also have young children plus this disciple of his are just lolis that means that the age is not that much older than his daughter so them calling him brother feels very weird to me. 🤔

It's a good story, I hope in the future he would not turn into a human as the dragon experience is truly a unique experience. Thnx for chapter author ❤️👍