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I had enjoyed this until the 8 yr old had to carry a useless but pretty Scarlet Johansson because she acts worse than a 8 yr old and is creepy in her behavior towards a kid. And i swear the author cant talk about a female without stating how pretty she is every two seconds. Considering he is a 8 yr old this seems to be over done and just turns creepy. Somehow authors can even turn a story about a young kid be surrounded by beautiful woman. Bet if he was old enough this would be harem. And how creepy the author is it may still turn out to be harem

I loved the story in the beginning, liked it in the middle and tired of ot at the end. The FL never completely or even remotely solved her problems at the core just the symptoms. She let all the troublemakers especially her half sister jump around causing issues, she would face slap and they would jump around even more. But the ending was the worst. Her ml died! Because she didnt solve her crappy family issues and apparently she jist let them go afterwords because there's no mention of them after. I hated this quickly put together ending for the pure fact that the FL never appreciated what she had untill he was gone and still never learned even after rebirth to solve her issues and it cost her the ml and she still waits 100 yrs to die? Guess she wasnt that heartbroken. This truly was a story of the ML solving the FL money problems while pretending to be broke so he could stay with her and the FL treating him like a boy toy up to the last minute. The most pitiful character in this story is the ML and he deserved so much better than the wishy washy FL.

The original died unknowing he had a specific body type that crashed his cultivation. The new guy that transmigrated knows and decides that he would be discovered with the personality change plus the original was bullied and harassed by the clan so he goes to the auction house like intended and plans to distance from the clan. Then he finds out the ppl who killed the original was his clan. So yeah..his clan is shitty. This isnt the original so why should he carry the burden of pretend for ppl who dont care abt him and wants his life? The smartest thing a transmigrated person can do is get away from those that knew the original. All this is found out by chapter 20.

The mc is weak all around. Phycially? Cant walk 5 steps without panting. Mentally? She panics at every turn. Emotionally? She is easily flustered and super easy to manipulate. She is the type that is passive in a verbal fight, she is so very easily flustered that she just cant speak so she loses in majority if not all verbal sparring. Of course she is the typical fl that has no strength barely any smarts. Very little to redeem her. She is there to have babies and point out something now and then. If she wasnt the fl she would be a background character that got less than a minute of screen time.

Was great until she met the ML. Like most strong female novels [especially asian one] soon as a strong FL meets the ML she becomes a "little woman" in his palm. Built up alot of hype for a badass woman only to disappear into smoke when met with the amazing male that will always be better than her in every way because *insert your favorite or many sexist reason*

The MC doesnt know anything but shows goodwill to her uncles family to the point she pays off their debt and gives them food and money. Now many may feel bad for the uncles family but she lost her dad because her dad felt indebted and left his two children and wife so his brother could stay. No one would look kindly upon the uncles family. Then she really didnt do anything bad to them but stopped favoring them then they got pissy. So im all for the mc ignoring the uncles family. They are both wrong but she is barring the punishment why they moan their victimness.

The MC has a huge advantage but cant save herself from being kidnapped and nearly auctioned off. She is 30 in sould but act like a tween. She cant even defeat her white lotus twin sister. Overall she is a weak FL that barely scapes by. And since she is reborn with a system/space to be that weak with all the advantage is boring and irritating.

It starts pretty good. The FL is weirdly still childish even as a reborn adult but eh I can overlook for now. She is all about making money and getting back at her backstabbong family. Then some worrying flags popped up. -her system nearly kills her and her respond "you dont know...ok thats fine" the system has issues repetitively and she still doent question it or get angry. -she acts like a 15 yr old at best at age 10 when she died after age 18. -time skip happened and now she is a master hacker but lets people slander her online. She lets them slander her to her face and barely responds. Then it gets worse. She now teaches and works for free because "everyone should blah blah". Basically she is none reactive to 90% of people and lets them badmouth her to her face then rejects money left and right and works for free. Like the author wanted her to be more "angelic" the type who speaks softly and never talks back to volunteering. When she started as a girl who had backbone and knew her worth. Her "little revenge" against her family barely mattered as she still doesnt stand up vocally against the "sister" By the time the "brother" finally tells her and she runs off like a preteens first confession I was done. This girls maturity has not gotten better she just got more meek and none reactive. End result? She became boring.