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Amazing, Charmant, incroyable, and just so mesmerizing!! Your imagination and skills as a writer are very powerful!! Do not stop writing only if you're in the writer's block or when you need a break..but just so fantastic!!

I absolutely love your story, it is not only lustful, and mature it also creates a fire that ignites readers to read this amazing story!! I love the characters, I love the plot, I love the storyline, and etc...But! Yes, There's a but, well I quite don't see the love, the loving fire, or the spark that should be exploding right there... Maybe add some moments where they don't have sex scenes but instead focus on how they fall in love! or what part of them do they love about her! I don't see that! Instead, I see hormonal men who have lustful tendencies toward the female lead who is turning very, very...needy.