If the “boy” was raised very sheltered then he may have the mentality of a child or just be very subservient.
[ Yes, yes. Thank you, Big Brother 777 ] The little boy replied quickly.
Sci-fi · Long Qingwen
Well when you get to see enough of these processes they stand out in your memory.
As he watched the things boiling silently, he couldn't help but lazily smile and lean against the wall. The things that seemed so easy and effortless now had once been a nightmare to him.
Fantasy · Yolohy
Delphi as a cleric. Makes sense if you connect it to oracles.
"Hehe! You're welcome, besides there is hardly any customer this evening, so I don't mind. Well, I was a cleric in an adventurer group a few years ago. Things didn't end well for us, so here am I." Delphi replied, explained a bit about how she became a clerk here.
Fantasy · Nickaido
So he’s Peter Pan now?
"Congratulations for becoming the first player in the world to achieve maximum level in Flying Skill, you are awarded a title, "I CAN FLY," please check your title for details."
Games · Snowstar
So they dont even look around? They’ll learn.
Not even 5 minutes since the game has begun, the forum was filled with insults especially by Angel race players.
Games · Snowstar
I would be petty towards the remaining brother too after how he was treated.
The time for the spring festival was nearing, and Lith wanted some extra pocket money to buy something nice for his parents and sisters. Trion was still a stranger to him.
Fantasy · Legion20
Your story reads well, but if you keep it to one point of view when he is narrating then it will read better.
Ow… ow… ow… God that hurts..." I was moaning in pain as I cleaned my wounds and they are healing at a pretty good speed. Once the adrenaline ran out and he came down from his battle high, I felt the painful effects of the cuts all over his body.
Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance
Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs