so far so good.. but i think you need an editor.. other then that, its good..
ch 0 5 Olympus 3
Fantasy · LazyBarbarian
as her boss is
I don't know if I take her words, she has a clear conflict of interest as his boss is Hermes, and the one that made the actual proposal.
Fantasy · LazyBarbarian
i did not
"Being in another world, I do not even know the Olympus was real…" I spoke to myself while walking besides Helena.
Fantasy · LazyBarbarian
can he become a god him self? i hope he can
"Let me summarize: I am going to receive two gold coins per year, plus two in advance. My descendants, up to the third generation, would live in your domain, which is close to Olympus. And I will be the feudal lord of such a divine fiefdom?"
Fantasy · LazyBarbarian
and still no last name?
[ Current Status:] [ Name: Hans
Fantasy · Almun_
what world did he come from before?.... and how was his life in that world?.. and what was the last Thing he remember from his last life?... what was his old name?.. how old was he when he died or did he even die?.. did he have any familie in his last life?... just some of the questions i have!
Well, in reality, I am in a whole new universe.
Fantasy · OverloadHunter
makeing my bf happy with less shopping..
- Author's question : What would you do if you got the Akshaya Patra in RL?
Fantasy · LazyMeow
i wounder if he can get xp, if he reads medical books...🤔🤔🤔
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: The Opportunity to Be Promoted
Urban · Holding an inch ruler
just wow
"Haha, if you all are high-end players from the 'Zhan Tian Guild', would you allow me and my daughter to join your guild?"
Games · Dull Fireball
🤮
"Certainly not! How is that possible?" Snow Fall rolled her eyes: "Who falls in love at first sight? Do you think this is a TV drama?"
Games · Dull Fireball
dude you have killed 1 mob...😑
"If I hadn't drawn the 'Star Bloodline,' I'd probably still be desperately fighting over Slimes. Now, my leveling speed has increased exponentially!"
Games · Dull Fireball
yes! no borring melee Class..
"I choose Mage." Su Yu made his decision.
Games · Dull Fireball
🙄
Inside the spaceship, a Skuru female pilot with light green skin reported to her superior:
Games · Dull Fireball
so did i!
iI have never seen him
"Sir Rufus, your arrival here gave us potential hope. Master Hermes is under a lot of pressure from some worlds. He can't even disclose the reasons to us. Nonetheless, this is a first. I have been here for almost two hundred years now. I never saw him so unrestless like now."
Feudal Trader
Fantasy · LazyBarbarian